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Please continue the story.. its great.

I hope Fluffy learns that everything he sees is not his for the taking.. and must wait.. I know he has waited nearly 500 yrs.. but Kagome is a strong woman and will fight him every step of the way. Especially, if fluffy dont tell her whats up. SHe hates secrets and cheaters.

KT/STT/STS

Oh this is such agood story. I hope you add another chapter soon. I'm a wee bit confused though as to why Kagome left Fluffy but I guess in later chapters it'll be more clear. Welp I hope you keep writing your story is simply wonderful.

This is an excellent fic. You immerse the reader in the minds of your characters. Feelings and actions are so intense. (I am also speaking of Elsewhere). As far as ideas go, if you want to go popular cannon, Sesshoumaru would know if Kagome were pregnant and I do believe that his animal nature may be a bit rough.

I'm not certain when you posted the last chappie, but you were in need of a little help in the muse department. Using a pregnant Kagome against Sesshoumaru would be cliche and Sesshoumaru would have smelled it, if you go by popular myth. I would save a child as a reward for Sesshoumaru after he have him approach regaining Kagome's favor as a mission to be investigated and planned in every detail. He must study the human mind, learn everything that he can about what makes Kagome happy, etc. He must woo her without suffocating her. I know how that can be done if you wish to email me.

sparkling_snowfall@hotmail.com

Snowfall

Geeze, I got interrupted on my IM and kinda screwed that up! LOL Anyhow, I can help with the details if you like.

Snowfall

Dear flower,
How are you? I hope your well. I'm not sure if my grammer is a lot better, if better at all, but if you want my help it is your. I'm a little lost because with "Elsewhere" I only got as far as chapter 21, so there's a whole lot I"m missing. But from what I have read, I like. Of course I would love for Kagome to be pregnant, and I do hope that you have plans for her pregnancy somewhere in the plot. Sesshoumaru being emotional and him being dependent while Kagome is trying to be independent is quite unusual and I can't wait to see where you are going with all of this. I love you're work, and I know that whatever you do, I'll love it. Oh yeah, where is Shippo and Kouga? Could you please have Kagome ask Sesshoumaru that question are for them to explore what happened to them? Please Please Please!!! Thank You and PEACE!!!

You really got it, congratulations!! I've never read a fic with this pairing before where I found nothing lacking.
I started reading "Elsewhere" and I was not able to stop until I had finished the hole story including this
sequel (I am utterly grateful for). Now as for your grammar, I advise you to roam AFF and read other
peoples fics while especially paying attention to the grammar. I promise: THERE you'll find terrible spelling!
"Elsewhere" (and its sequel) is the only story I thought well enough to be reread, so praise to you.
Try to finish "Fumbling towards ecstasy" as soon as possible
Greetings Fuchsia

well it took me a while to find Elsewhere and this story but i did manage to do it! ever since a single spark went haywire, i've been trying to find the fics that i used to read on either this site or ff.net. well i found you. and it's made me incredibly happy. now to review the story. i loved the end of Elsewhere. it was great. this story is good too, but as you said, it could definately be more. i don't know how you could do it or what you could use, all i know is that it's missing that something that Elsewhere had, that made it great. wow i think this is the most critical review i've ever written, and it's really not that critical. well update soon.~Emily

A sequel o^_____________^o....
YAY!!!
<lol I loved Elsewhere and this one seems like it's going to be pretty good too
I'm a bit confused about what happened to Kagome and Sesshoumaru though.
Well hope to read more soon ^.^
Keep up the good work!
Raine

<< WTF oO what happened to my nice long review??? Why are there only like two lines left?? -.-

I love this story. The dark imagery creates a very strong statement in my mind. I'm hoping that you're still going to continue at some point?