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for Moonlight's Shadow

by northstar

person sendosha
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great story. Dark and full of angst. I´ve never hated Kikyou before but in your story I just wished Sango´s hiraikotsu had caught her. To call Kagome a whore and an abomination- a clay doll who shouldn´t be alive! And Inuyasha just proved what a worthless bastard he is, that´s why I would never pair him with Kagome. He doesn´t deserve to be well treated, not because of his hanyou heritage but of his lack of or ill character. I just hope you will make Kagome strong enough to take the rest of her soul back.
person ChaosD
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SWEET! Updates! The story is great, definitely the best Naraku/Kagome pairing I've read so far. *nods* Well keep writing great fics, I'll patiently wait for the next updates or stories you do. Until then, may your mind stay focused.
person KittyKatGirl
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O wow....
This is very, very well done. Emotions: perfect. Please....PLEASE keep updating!!
*gives Inuyasha noogie* Ah....noogies for simpletons...
person Lord-Anime
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I guess I will be joining your trip to Hell...
That was a very well written chapter, just one thing...are Naraku and Kagome now bound in some way? Both thier powers are nither pure nor corrupt. This should be good.

Please, update. And if you need a beta, please, send me an email.
person Lord-Anime
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate that stupid runt. I like Sess/Kag, but this is very interesting. I have a hard time deciding how to view this. The pairing is generaly rape, but this is only sorta rape. But anyhoo, I found this to be well written. Fucking goddamn Hayou runt. I agree with Sess on this one. Send the fuck-up bastard failure of an inuhanyou to hell, better yet. have some random person rape kikyou in front of Inu and make him like watching her be raped. That is revenge. Is it any wonder I like Sess/Kag, the "Ice Lord" would treat her like a human, not a shard dectector.

To hell with the fucking bastard Hanyou,
Lord Anime
person donovanwitch
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!! This newest chapter was the best yet. I can't believe that after al Kagome has been through that Inuyasha isn't trying to comfort her, he is too busy being mad. I am so glad that you decided to make this an entire story. What is going to happen to Kagome next? And what is Naraku going to do now that all of Kagome's friends have come and taken her away? You must keep updating. I absolutely love your story!
person J Glessner
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, this story sort of reminds me of a bad dream, the kind that you can't quite remember until someone mentions something odd and the memories flood back... No, I've never had this kind of dream, that's just how I feel when I read this. I don't know if you believe in reincarnation, but THAT'S what this particular memory feels like; a life I lived before. So this fic kinda creeps me out.

Other than that, however, I commend you on your writing style and will very much appriciate the next chapter. I want to know just how corrupted Kagome has become, now that she soul-bonded (or something similar) to Naraku... And I think I know where the Shikon jewel has got off to.
person AJ
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!!!!!! THAT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!! I SWEAR THAT DAMNED HANYOU IS SO STUPID!!!!!! OH, WELL MAYBE HE WILL GROW OUT OF IT!!!!! LOL !!!!!!! Anywho, I hope to see a whole lot more of Kagome and Naraku!!!! LOVED THE CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!! *HUGS*
KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kachan
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...here's to hoping you continue this story. It rocks. ^-^
person chanda
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The end A/N well said, this is a very dark fic, and very well written... I am glad that you updated... I am always a hopeful Kag/Inu fan, however what choice you make for this story will not sway me from reading more....

Chanda