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for Moonlight's Shadow

by northstar

person kinoko *not signed in*
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll tell you what this story is: powerful. It simply seduces the reader so perfectly with things of pain that one should hate to read but somehow can't stop, and pleasure, the thought of perhaps it will all turn out alright in the end.... and then curiousity, as to where the hell you're taking this story. It's great, keep it going.

-kinoko
person Teenage Angel
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that was sooo good! hope u update soon! i really wanna knoe wats gonna happen next! it's getting really good! i love naraku/kagome pairings, i hope u don't change ur idea abt the pairing throughout the course of the story! anyways, keep it up!
person Teenage Angel a.k.a. SesshysGirl
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, i just sent u a review, i forgot one really good detail. like i said in one of my previous review's, maybe u shouldget Kagome pregnant with Naraku's child! that would be so cool and that way kagome will have to go bak with him, or she'll be repulsed by inuyasha, etc! anyways, keep it up! hope u update soon!
person chanda
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update, I wonder what is store for the next chapter...

Chanda
person AJ
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U updated. I can't wait when Naraku gets her back!! YAY!!!! *Hugs u* I can't wait* Lol!!!!! Great chapter and I hope that u update soon!
person Wingz
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! So good! Please continue!
person Kags21
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good update real soon
person Kayla
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Listen you got talent!I love this story!you gotta keep on writing plz!
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! Naraku no longer has an obsession with Kikyo, because of Kagome. Their souls aligned, and that has more meaning in it than an odd obsession with a mostly-dead woman.

The added problem will most likely be that he can't stop thinking about her. And it's very likely that the same will be her problem, after a time. Lots of spiritual crap, is what this is. Who knows but you how you plan to use their new found "bonding", but I know already it'll be good. Damn good.

Now, update as soon as you can! I'm paitent, but only for so long... Are you one of those monthly updaters? Cuz I can handle that.
person Badkitty
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice!!! I usually don't read Kagome/Naraku pairings but something about this one caught my eye. i just had to read it and I'm glad that I did. It is great, you are a wonderfull writer and I can't wait to read more:)