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for Moonlight's Shadow

by northstar

person mel
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I like this story, and I can't wait until the next update. Keep up the good work!
person Kitty
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fun story :3 ku ku ku. I can just imagine what'll happen in the upcoming chapters. On a more serious note, it's rather horrible how just because of a body's natural reaction, a person can feel 'dirty' after being assaulted. The psychological damage must be horrifying. Poor things.
person Rhianna
schedule May 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Keep updating!
person Char
schedule May 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! I loved it!!! I hope there is more coming! Call me sick but I love these type of stories, very dark and sexy. I even have a C2 on ff.net for just these type of stories, called "The dark side of love" http://www.fanfiction.net/c2/30838/3/0/1/

Please please update soon, I can't wait for more.

Thanks!
Char

person Badgrl74
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Sooooooo dark and kinky! I love it! I want more! Mwah Ah Ah!
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how incredible depressing painful and sad. i hope kagome gets better soon! how can inu yasha be so incredibly stupid? update soon!
person victoria
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was extremely fascinating. It is hard to find a good erotica writer, who has a plot as well as smutty scenes. Some of the pieces i have read have been shockers! Yours was quite something though and i am looking forward to the next chapter eagerly
Is there any idea when it will come?
person Kitty Kat
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooooh!!!! BURN! GO MIROKU! Omg! My mouth literally dropped when he said that. Damn!
person Kitty Kat
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can't wait until you update. Heh, I rarely review AFF stories, but this one was exceptional^_^

Don't take too long!

**blows kiss**
person Tears of Black
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.....this is so amazingly well written! This one of only two Naraku fanfics that I actually like and enjoy (and trust me, I've read HUNDREDS), and the other is on mediaminer.org. Your extensive vocabulary contributes to this work immensly (as I have read a work which wrote exactly Naraku: omg im cumming Kagome: wow) and it is extremely well written (and edited, thank GAWD) unlike many of the fanfiction I have read over the years. This is unlike anything I have read before. Please keep updating. I'm sure you have many fans out there, please count me as one of them.

So, may the higher power be with you! (no, I don't believe in God, just a higher power ^O^)