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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4
Phew. Gosh, that was an exciting lemon. Very well written. Also a very interesting description of what happens when miko and demon mate. I like the idea of souls blending and their powers binding them. The miko's soul gains a bit of demon, and the demon's soul a bit of miko. Huh, fascinating to see how that will turn out.
So, Inu Yasha has arrived. I'm curious to see how he will react to a Kagome that is bound to Naraku. *jumps on her chair and clicks Next Chapter*
Phew. Gosh, that was an exciting lemon. Very well written. Also a very interesting description of what happens when miko and demon mate. I like the idea of souls blending and their powers binding them. The miko's soul gains a bit of demon, and the demon's soul a bit of miko. Huh, fascinating to see how that will turn out.
So, Inu Yasha has arrived. I'm curious to see how he will react to a Kagome that is bound to Naraku. *jumps on her chair and clicks Next Chapter*
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5
Poor Kagome. She's so torn and in so much emotional turmoil. You wrote this amazingly well; even though the poor girl changes every other second, the reader (at least this one) is never at a loss and always feels with her.
I was cheering for her when she told Kikyo off. It was just like Kikyo, to be so righteous and so oh-I'm-so-pure-I-would-never-let-something-like-that-happen-to-me-because-I'm-a-stronger-miko-than-you. Yay for Kagome! She is - or was - stronger than Kikyo. I don't think Kikyo would ever have changed place with Kagome had the situation been different. Self-righteous bitch.
And Inu Yasha ... well, that reaction was to be expected, wasn't it? First be repulsed, and then be affronted when she doesn't want him to touch her. So like him.
I'm glad that at least the others aren't too shocked to be supportive. It was kind of cute, the way Sango carried Kagome away (behold! A plot bunny was born in Cira's mind! *argh! not another one*). So, Kagome goes home? Can she? I mean, when she goes home she has to face her family, and at least her mother will know what happened to her. Can Kagome bear that? Well, I will see.
Poor Kagome. She's so torn and in so much emotional turmoil. You wrote this amazingly well; even though the poor girl changes every other second, the reader (at least this one) is never at a loss and always feels with her.
I was cheering for her when she told Kikyo off. It was just like Kikyo, to be so righteous and so oh-I'm-so-pure-I-would-never-let-something-like-that-happen-to-me-because-I'm-a-stronger-miko-than-you. Yay for Kagome! She is - or was - stronger than Kikyo. I don't think Kikyo would ever have changed place with Kagome had the situation been different. Self-righteous bitch.
And Inu Yasha ... well, that reaction was to be expected, wasn't it? First be repulsed, and then be affronted when she doesn't want him to touch her. So like him.
I'm glad that at least the others aren't too shocked to be supportive. It was kind of cute, the way Sango carried Kagome away (behold! A plot bunny was born in Cira's mind! *argh! not another one*). So, Kagome goes home? Can she? I mean, when she goes home she has to face her family, and at least her mother will know what happened to her. Can Kagome bear that? Well, I will see.
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6
Moremoremoremoremoremoremore! And soon!! Please? I'm so curious to see what will happen when Naraku and Kagome meet again! How will her mark affect her? And that blending of souls during sex, what will that do to them? Oh, please, please write more soon. I really enjoyed this story so far (and there I thought I didn't like dark stories ...).
Moremoremoremoremoremoremore! And soon!! Please? I'm so curious to see what will happen when Naraku and Kagome meet again! How will her mark affect her? And that blending of souls during sex, what will that do to them? Oh, please, please write more soon. I really enjoyed this story so far (and there I thought I didn't like dark stories ...).
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good story ... keep up the good work
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliantly written!! Update soon... man, you have me hooked.
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you updated this story I had though you forgot all about it.
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
W O W!!! omg! this is absolutely amazing. i dont think I've read a fanfic that has held my interest so completely. Amazing job! youre writing is compelling,strong,and heartwrenching. you have the ability to put the real emotions of a rape victim into your story so skillfully and completely. it's amazing. i wait for your next chapter with baited breath. ^^
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I hope you update soon.
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
But...but, but we've read this part already! Please you have to update again, please! We wanna see what happens!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. It has alot of emotional impact. Keep updating, your doing a great job.