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It's amazing how you could just hold that one scene for so long. You just keep building the suspense, and I know i'm not the only one going insane for more. Can wait to see what happens when the plot starts to thicken.

Keep on trucking........

Wow... That's really intense........

-Jazz-

o_O poor Kags. my god...that bastard really needs to be stuck in a blender on high speed. seriously!!! where the heck is inu to save teh day??? GREAT story. i absoutely love this fic. you have such great ways with your words and honestly such a blatent show of good versus evil...pure versus filth. god, poor Kagome, feeling though she betrayed inu even though she knows she was drugged (if seh can remember that). honestly i was half expecting her to scream out for InuYasha when trying to say 'i love you.' turn the single I into a name, that would piss that fucker off. GOD I HATE NARAKU!!! (but you portray him soooo well. LOL) great freakin story, keep it up!!!! ( i have been praying for this to be updated everytime i check. glad it was:-)

"What are you doing?"
"Raping you."
"Oh."------I don't know what it is about that piece
of dialogue. It just sounds so adorable to me.
I'm going to hell, aren't I?

OMG that was hot!!! 0,0’ ..You did a wonderful job with the way you described what the evil dark hottie was doing to her…(damn ..crosses legs)..0,0’ Please update as soon as you can…

Awww man! Why'd ya stop there?! Hope you update soon. I think your writing style has greatly improved than from the first two chapters for some reason. So great job on that.

WOW!!!! Twisted but very good!!!

What a great place for a cliffy!!! update soon, k?! Good job!!!

Excellent job, I can't wit for the next installment! It would be hella twisted if Kikyou was in on this with Naraku....

oh my god, there I hoped Inu Yasha would come in time before Naraku could touch her ever further.
You have to make up for it in the next chapter, post it soon!!