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The darkness of this fic is matched only by the eloquence and sophistication of the writing. I think you have done a beautiful job telling a horrifying story. I do hope you still plan to conclude it.

O.o Wow...scary! Totally twisted. I'm a Kagome Inuyasha fan so I can't say I really enjoyed the K/N stuff, but I liked the fact that she came out of it at the end. I've also kinda wondered what would happen between Naraku and Kagome so that' why I read it. This also proves that Kagome is still deeply in love with Inuyasha, Yea!^_^ It's offficial, Kagome rocks! On some good notes I liked your use of dialogue. You really kept them in character. Like Kagome, I'm not a big Kikyo fan either. I pity more than anything really, but I think Kagome would have done what she did in the story if put in the situation. I don't think she id it to save Kikyo, I think she did it for Inuyasha...that's what I tink anyway.

I think I am going to have to hunt you down if you don't finish this soon.

I'm sorry for Kagome, I'm really really sorry for her. Why will she start stop being so naive? It's not her fault she reacted the Naraku's touch, most of the time, even if your being raped, a female will enjoy the touch. Most I mean. It's not her fault. One of my friends when I was in high school got raped, and her family blamed her for actually having an orgasm. It was the doctors who said she couldn't help it, it was the body itself. To this day, she is shunned from most of her supposingly 'friends' and 'family'. I'm one of her only friends.

People blame themselves for things that couldn't be avoided, it's sad really, and I really don't get it. If it's out of your power, what could you do?

Anyways, PLEASE UPDATE!

Sincerely,
Marigold

WHHHHHHHHHHHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Y DID U STOP AT THAT PART YOU SHOULD HAVE CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!!! I HAVE SO MANY QUESTIONS LIKE IS NARAKU GOING TO KILL KAGOME FOR WHAT SHE SAID? IS INUYASHA EVER GOING TO STOP FIGHTING THOSE DAMN DECOIES? HOW ABOUT KIKYO IS EVER GOING TO WAKE UP? IS NARAKU REALLY GOING TO RAPE HER HARD OR JUST SLOWLY LIKE BEFORE(NOT THAT BEING A PERV. AT ALL I WAS JUST WONDERING)? SOOOOOOOOOOOO PLZ CONTINUE THIS STORYPLZ FOR ME!!!!!

I absoloutly love your fanfic! What a cliffy, you're bad! Please update soon!

*sob* I feel for Kagome!!! I love this fic, and please update, if this isn't the end!

That was gross...very gross. So why did I like it so much?...hm...looks like I need an experianced profesional to anser that question. Did I mention gross?

Oh yeah. update soon 'cause now I'm addicted to your sickness.

vary good story vary good. but dont let naraku take her purity Pls dont let her do it. she has to give her self to Inuyasha Pls.

P.s. I like your story but inuyasha should have her purity first ^_^

Oh, he's really not gonna be happy now....