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I read all of this story yesterday, and now found the time to leave a comment.

I love how you kept them in character, I absolutely enjoyed this.

Just one question, will you be making a continuation of this story?

please you have to update soon. i cant wait that much longer... what will happen next?? will Inu Yasha hate Kagome, blame her for what happened. please you have to update. i really liked that fic... i hope you update soon.....

good luck
may kami-sama be with you

yay to updates ^_^ I think this is a great fic, cant wait to find out what happens next. Please hurry and update again soon.

This is the first Naraku/ Kagome story I have read. My favorite pair is Sessh/ Kagome, but I have to say that I have really enjoyed this story. I've never thought that their could be romance or interest between the two. So, I have to gove you kudos for that. I only ask that they get some traits from one another. Anyway, Thanks, for doing a wonderful job. I hope he can find it in himself to trully love someone. Peace!!! Good Job!

Please, please write more to the story! I absolutely love your work, I can't wait to read more!

wonderful. I must say it's one of the better Nar/Kag fics I've read. I'm always looking for fics of them, but most make no sense or just move to fast. This story is the kind I like...well maybe not the raping, but everything else I like. I hope you continue with this story because I think it has a lot of potential and can go further...maybe get Kagome willingly?

OMG AWESOME CHAPTER really, it was great. Update soon !

Haha, the end of this one litterally had me cry out in suprise in R/L.

Masterfully written!
Massive kudo's!

Not only is it written in a not only readable way, but as well as in intelligent one,
and then you actually bothered to go into the psyche of Naraku in a most pleasing way!

Will there be more or is this it?

Ah, at the end of chapter 4, one is most definately desiring to know the outcome of
such a joining. That statement being made, I'm sure you can figure which I'm hoping
for.

Either way, as said before, MASSIVE KUDO'S ON THIS ONE!

Simply awesome! Especially the ending of the fourth chapter and the "merging" of their natures. I was kind of worried the whole time because you made it seem like something bad was going to happen, but it turned out just the way I wanted it to >:) . Exactly my kind of story. I'm looking forward to, and hope you write more of this story. And I hope you keep her with Naraku, wanting and needing him. :3 It would be so blase if Inuyasha were to rescue and make love to her ^.~ My opinion anyway... Either way, very good fic. Good spelling and grammer, very IC, and darkly sensual. I love it!

i loved it. mack another chapter. becuse not being abil to see it is torcher.