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i like this story, please continue

i like this story, please continue

I can not even begin to describe the feeling that ran thru me when I saw a chapter five. The beauitful thrill that went rushing across my skin.
Thank you for your update.
I said it before and I will say it again....Holy fucking Christ.....that was perfect.

Wow, I just found this today and I'm so glad that I did. Most Kagome/Naraku fiction... well it really isn't all that well-written. Or I should say, I've yet to find a nice variety of well-written fiction of this particular pairing. Granted, the rape was pretty graphic, I have been enjoying this. I was happy to see that you noted that the pairing for this would be Kagome/Naraku, and I hope that your muse doesn't veer off someway and make this Kagome/Inuyasha... don't get me wrong, I enjoy that pairing as well but I'd love to see this continue and be completed as a Kagome/Naraku pairing.

I think it'd be really interesting if you also explored Onigumo's [sp?] character and that particular side to Naraku. I also hope that at some point Naraku realizes or comes to a realization that Kagome isn't *just* a replacement for Kikyou but he's desires and [perhaps cares] for her because she is Kagome.

Anywayz, you really left us hanging after that last chapter and I hope that you don't take too long to update again. Normally, I can speculate what's going to happen next and now, I just have no idea - so help me out - toss up a new chapter and SOON! ^_^

PLZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE!!!!!! its dark so i kinda skipped over the sex part (SRY) but make the next chapter plz i wanna see how inuyasha will react!! your suich a good writer!!


~fluffy

wow... this worked out really well... im usually not into this kinda thing but it turned out great! keep up the good work! 10000/10

I'm not sure if I reviewed or not, but I had to make sure I did. I just wanted to say "Great Job!". I have one question. I thought she was gagged, how can she scream "Inuyasha" and "Never"? You said something about in her mind, but if that's true how did Naraku respond "Your Mine Forever!". Please take out the time to answer and keep me updated if you can. Keep up the good work PEACE!!!

I love this story. Naraku is insane... and I love insanity. Thanks! Keep writing!

This was an AWESOME story. I liked how you showed Kagome's complete trust that Inuyasha would find her until the very end. I do think that you should write another chapter though, because you left this at what i think of as a cliffhanger. I NEED to find out what's going to happen when Inuyasha finds out what happened to Kagome. Please update and add. Oh, and all of your other stories are really good.

Wow... this is absolutely amazing. Pure effing genius... you have an incredible talent! The way you wrote this was rivetting - your characters utterly beleivable; unlike most of the nar/kag drivel that is out there. I will be waiting with baited breath for your next update.