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I so loved you version I wish there was more. ❤️❤️

wow, the narkag part was hot. I hope kagome free kagura's heart.

Okay, I read this story years ago, and every time I log onto AFF I keep coming back here to see if you have updated. This is such an amazingly well written story and I am DYING for another chapter! Please come back and update soon, for those of us who absolutely love this story. The emotions and feelings are just so intense... Can't get enough!!!

The plot is very unique, and the story is (as always like your other ones) extremely well written.
Please continue as its a pain not to know beyond...very well written indeed!!

Hi there,
So i feel kind of bad for not reviewing each chapter but I just wanted you to know that i think this story is fabulous. It flows so smoothly and your writing is excellent. I can't wait to read more.

Serenity

I'm so amazed I don't even know how to start. Well i guess a good start is to congratulate you for this piece of art. Because that's what it is to me.
I have to add that this is my first fan fic story i ever read. Ever..
I can't finish reading other fan fics because i have the feeling they get "out" of the characters. But yours was different. You made everyone act so naturally that i really thought it happened in the anime lol
I acutally cried when Kagome was thinking why Sango hadn't been in her place. That bit was so true and happened so often in real life that it made me cry.
PLEASE update soon. I'm sure you have many fans for this story..don't let them down xD
I'm count on you
Anyway you did a GREAT job. You sure your not a writer?:P
P.S: Kagome/Naraku fics are my favorite ^_^

Using my psp to review is rather...annoying, but your story is more than worth it. ^_^
(no internet on my laptop)
I enjoy your writing style, grammer and flow. Your character depth for Nar is also something I like.
I've been trying to find a good Nar/Kag fic that I enjoy for awhile now, seems I finally found my fix, X>
And I personaIly like the tentacle idea, lol.
So looks like you have a new fan, ;D
-Sonsasu The Winter Dragon-

ok first of all love it! and i love the idea of tentacle sex! please keep it up

This story has the best sex scene I've ever read...wow, I loved it really, everything was so vivd and wonderful, and your description of it was a breath of fresh air...ppl don't usually get so indepth ( the muscles on naraku's ass flexing..etc) I really enjoyed reading this story, every part of it, even chapter 5, which you called 'filler' which I believe was vital to the development and the maintainance of a solid plot structure. what I usually consider filler is when something completely unrealed happens to the sories plot..like, if u saw some of thelater episods of naruto, where they visit villages and complete usless tasks, leave and never see the ppl their again..a bit rambly, aren't I. Any way, the point is this story kicks ass! I'm sorry to see that you haven't updated i over a year, so that means it will probably remain on finished, though I must respect that, as I have lost interest in pieces before....PLEASE UPDATE....lol, n e way, great job!

Urrrrgh, this is such a great story, but it would be even better if you updated it! I've never read a Nar/Kag story before, and I really liked this one, regardless of the dark themes in it! And the fact that you write so well just makes me want to read moooore!! So please update? Please?