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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so unbelievably great!! is there more? A second chapter with fierce tiger? Yes that is a perfect name! Sango and Naraku, I love how you did them. A little oocness but in a good way! I absoulutly loved it! I always tell myself I need to give helpful critism so here it goes, there were some spelling mistakes (so sue you) and you used some wrong words "She look at it wearily" wearily=warily. But yeah. That stuff REALLY dosn't matter. Loved it to death! Hope there'll be more!
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh... sensai was rejected but i'm happy for lady Sango please make a sequeal to this!
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH....MY....GOD! That was awesome!
I loved it!
It was detailed, kinda funny, very well written, romantic, sweet, it contained a good lemon, a happy ending and the most important thing of all:
NARAKU! *Drools* YAY! And you mentioned Sesshoumaru! YAY! *Faints while drooling...ALOT*
Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
I loved it!
It was detailed, kinda funny, very well written, romantic, sweet, it contained a good lemon, a happy ending and the most important thing of all:
NARAKU! *Drools* YAY! And you mentioned Sesshoumaru! YAY! *Faints while drooling...ALOT*
Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, just loved it!! I like the change in Naraku!^_^
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really LOVED this story. It was amazing
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ATROPA girl you did it again loved it can I say again loved it. They had a baby girl where do you get your ideas from keep up the great work ok.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No ... He's not baaaad, he's just DRAWN that way! LOL! Had a great chuckle over this! Why couldn't he give birth??? He has enough spare parts, doesn't he???? :)
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Next time you are giving birth demon, she screamed as the next wave of pain hit her with force." OMG hahaha... I love that line!!!
Aww Naraku was so sweet in this.
Aww Naraku was so sweet in this.