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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice keep going
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok i can barly read this fic cuz u have to go back and forth to read it fix it and maybe space it out a bit when u do this i may actully be able to read it
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fix the text format and I might read it. Right now, it's just a big block of text without lines between paragraphs. Proper formating might make me read it.
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im dying!!!!!!! please update now!!!!!! I cant wait to read more!!!!!!
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok anyone have suggustions i have a total brainfart happening here.
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh...interesting....messa likei..MORE PLEASE....you give more and i'll give you a cookie
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi. please,please,pelase,pelase update soon i want to know what happens next oh yeah i was wondering if could not put Inuyasha to show so much in a sentence that you have to move the bar to see what it says in the next sentence please.
Oh! this is not a flame if thats what your thinking but i like the story and keep it coming .
SEE Yah!
Oh! this is not a flame if thats what your thinking but i like the story and keep it coming .
SEE Yah!
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummm ya
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hii just wanted to check reviews. Sorry about how chapter 2 ended thats not really how its ending i just had to get off of the computer.
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dont pay attention to that person the story doesnt suck...actualy I liked it. You can develop it a bit and add things, trough the writting of the chapters you'll get a great story so keep at the work and update soon!!!!