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person Patty530
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank You for your update. Wonderfully done. I think Shippo is in for a very hard time, at least at first. This is a fabulous story, I do hope you keep it up. It has everything, emotion, angst, romance, all in balance. But I do have a question. They're not just going to wake up to find it was all a dream, are they? :)

Luv;
Patty
person Kate
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, it's nice to see a new chapter up... and a great one at that! I'm just going to go ahead and forgive you for not updating in like... a month or two? It was probably out of your hands anyways... Stupid bosses... Besides, it gave me time to re-read the whole story XD... Anyways, nice chapter, I like the whole idea of Sesshomaru teaching Shippo, the poor kid will seem less useless that way... Oh well, can't wait for next one! Keep up the good work! =D
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when Shippo was going to grow. This is great and...this is almost better then the actual anime. You are a fantastic writer.
person WTW
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~waves~ hi hi hun,
Just checking up on you. I pray all is well and that your able to find time to update. ^^ *hugs the story and misses new chapters* XD
person adeaneri
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yipeeee!!! an update cant wait to read.
person Kate
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, chapter 70! I feel like I should go out and celebrate with fireworks and stuff... Anyways, great chapter very exciting ;)... Poor Silk having to go through the whole cave business again, I feel sorry for him -_- Oh well, I'm happy you didn't go through with the whole "And they all died. The end" thingie... XD Oh and btw, I found the Belgariad series on isohunt.com they have a bunch of stuff there :o
person WTW
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*claps* An update! So glad to see your still willing to write this story out hun! Thank you! And you even left us at another wonderful cliff hanger! XD So mean, lol. Defenitly enjoying your creativity hun thank you! Keep it up!
person Patty530
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! THANK YOU! THANKS FOR UPDATING. THAT WAS A WONDERFUL CHAPTER. POOR MIROKU. PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN. YOU'RE A HELL OF A WRITER! KEEP IT UP.

LUV;

PATTY
person Shaid
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was one hell of a chapter and a great little cliffie at the end of it. It really amuses me to think of Miroku imitating Sesshomaru's affectations. Sango's reaction startled me until just a few moments ago as I thought about it. Miroku is somewhat even keeled and calm in demeanor but he is open with his emotions all the same. When angry and focused, he can be intimidating and I'd imagine he'd look a bit like that when doing his impression of Sess. Anyway, really great chapter and I'm still totally enthralled with the story. When I saw that it had updated tonight when I got home, I did a quick little "glee!" dance in my chair. BTW, you're not going to leave that cliffie hanging for next chapter, are you?!? You wouldn't say, skip to how Inuyasha and Kagome are doing and make us wait several updates to find out what happened to Sango and Velvet, would you? Would you?!?
person Shaid
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new chapter! Great update. I'm glad Poldra is so open with Sessh in Rin's training. And I really like how Sessh included Inuyasha in this lesson. I'm going to need to re-read again soon, though, to refresh my memory on things. Oh, well, it's not like it's a boring story. ;-)