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please update soon the suspense is killing me

I love it. I just wish there was more.

this story is great please update soon, this story can't go unfinished

Excellent story! It has kept me rivetted for the past few days. I can't wait for the next update.

Aaaaand you did exactly what I thought you would do and left us hanging with Sango and Velvet. :-) However, this is one of the best chapters to date, I think. I'm never quite sure what's going on with Shippou, he's very hard for me to write or even read or contemplate. It may have something to do with how close he is in age to the kids I work with and I'm a bit horrified by all the poor thing's had to go throughas well as the fairly adult thought processes generally attributed to him. He's a kid, regardless of physical age and what not, he's still a child. But you captured an innocence and a wonderfully complex yet simple mindset that really helps me understand him more. The simplicity of it was what I felt was fundamental; knwing he shouldn't feel jealous but being aware the jealousy is misplaced. I really enjoyed this chapter. This was such an intersting look inside a character I've never quite understood.

OMG. I just found this story, and have spent the past three days reading nothing but this. Although I feel guilty for neglecting my writing in doing so, this story was so compelling that I just couldn't resist reading it. This story is easily better than any of the manga I have ever read, and better than the TV show in many ways of how I imagined Inuyasha would progress. I am eargly looking forward to future updates, and I don't feel like I deserve critiquing your work in any way.

Keep up the good work. :D

Good to see an update. Too bad you don't seem to update FF. That's where I have you on my favorites list. It's about time Shippo got the smack laid down on him. He really does need it. What will happen when Zedar shows up again, will Rin be under his control or something? Hope to see more soon.

Its been awhile since you have updated. Did you had writers block?? I hope that if that was the case that you are over it and will be sending out some great chapters to read. Update really soon and welcome back.

great update. im so happy for it, great putting shipoou in his place spoiled little runt always making kagome sit poor inu. cant wait for the next update.

so wonderful. I enjoyed it so much. please write more very soon.