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person tejas
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good storytelling! I've read those books,been awhile thou. Keep it comming and I keep reading.Deal?
person collegegirl
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well another great chapter. I love Sess and Inu-Yasha's banter, I can see them doing that. Poor Sess, wanting to protect Rin from everyone else. There are a few grammer errors here and there but nothing too bad. It's kind of confusing but then again the two guys are confused too. Can't wait until the next chapter, keep up theh good work.
person fallenangel7583
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...great fic! i'm so lost with what is going on because i have no idea what teh fic is that is mixed in but regardless, i love it. the interaction between inuyasha and sesshoumaru is wonderful! i love fics like that! as for the others, well...i'm sure i'll figure it out sooner or later. its great though! i love it! you have a great handle on Sesshoumaru's character depiction and definition. i love fluffy!!! anywho's, keep it going and good luck!!
person collegegirl
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story, can't wait for the next chapter. I love how you make sure the characters are actually in character. I love how Polgara got Sess to dry the dished and the concern he has for Rin. Keep up the great work.