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person Gem
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww another "almost-bonding/no-bloodshed-moment" for the brothers! I like the way you are doing this. They may not like each other but better the devil you know than the one you don't, so they trust one another just that smidge more than their companions. I am curious to find out what you are hinting at with Naraku. Can't wait til next time.
person New Fan
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What's up with Sess and the brotherly concern for Inuyasha well being and his honor? Why was that
guy sent to 'kill' Inuyasha? Very interesting story. Update soon
person CollegeGirl
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Poor Inu Yasha, so confused. I love the whole sibling bonding part and I can't wait to see what happens next. It was funny witht he spy and Sess coiming right to Inu Yasha's defense. Then Kagome makes Inu Yasha more confused by being all lovey dovey one second and ignoring him the next. I loved how she manipulated him. Poor guy with the accent, he gets all offended by Inu Yasha. He's going to be encountering more issues along the way if he keeps addressing Kagome that way. Unless of course he finally mates her. I love how you have them get interupped, it doesn't seem quite right for them to go all the way yet. Well I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Gem
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the way you delt with Kagome and Inuyasha in this chapter. You sure kept Inu off balanace - the poor guy really does not know what hit him! And the interruption at the end - classic. I agree, one more than slightly cranky hanyou to deal with, again. Is Sess finally going to show that he cares for Inu as his blood, so to speak, now that Inuyasha MIGHT be maturing a little?( Strange concept that). The two of them working togeather could rival the forces of nature. Looking forward to your next offering as always. Thank you.
person Gem
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice calm interlude for this chapter. Even a bit of sibling bonding - well as much as the Inu brothers will probably do under less than life threatening circumstances, at least at this point in their relationship. Kagome's going easy on Inuyasha for now but I don't see her character allowing him off the hook for to long. She has been waiting for a very long time for some sign from him, and now she has had it I don't think she'll give up on him without even more of a fight now. She can be even more stubborn than him given the right motivation! Enjoyed it as ever.
person IamReven
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this FF!!! The Belgariad is probably my favorite series. I, like you, have read it and the Mallorean at least 20 times. Inuyasha is one of my newer passions, but I never thought of combining the two. The crossover scenerio is believable and you've done an excellent job of staying true to characters from both series. I can't wait to read more!!!!
person collegegirl
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Poor Inu getting tackled by Rin. Now he'll always be pestered by her. And he is so screwed by thinkilng that he can change the subject of mates with Kagome. Can't wait until the next chappie.
person New Fan
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally, Inuyasha confess his feelings. It had to take a lot of pushing on Kagome's part, but he finally admitted it.
Now, that they confess to each other, is Sess going to be jealous that Inuyasha is now with is 'mate' and he have
to wait until Rin is older? Update soon.
person New Fan
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So things are going to get interesting. I hope that Inuyasha would not deny what he said to Kagome. I hope that
Kagome will not be hurt in the long run. Update soon.
person Gem
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes this last chap. was just as good. I really did not expect any less, as you have not disappointed yet. I liked how you managed to get Inu to confess his feelings. Somehow, that he had to be weak from being injured and whoozy from blood loss makes it believable. His character is just to hard headed to do so otherwise!