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person smurfsicle
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*standing ovation* Bravo! about time they did the nasty lol. anyways I LOVE this fic good job, keep it up your a good writer.
person IamReven
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better and better! I can't wait to "see" some action with both Inuyasha and Garion. Considering how they both kick some serious ass, fighting alongside each other should be incredible. I also like they way you have expanded Sessy's character without compromising it. My only criticism is that Inuyasha has been a little too bitchy, but even that is undrestandable considering the new situation has him on edge. Maybe now that he and Kagome have FINALLY mated, he will calm his butt down some. Keep it coming!!!!
person Gem
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I loved the fact that Kagome was still nervous about being 'caught in the act', it lent an air of realism to it some how. The Inn scence was just plain good all around. You have the seamy underbelly of a city and its more colorful denizens rubbing shoulders with the ruling elite. Always makes for good reading. Did not see the entrance of Miroku and Sango coming. The reunion between them should be good for a few luaghs, given Miroku's habit of groping. Mind younow that Inu and Kagome are mated he just might lose more than his hand! I can hardly wait to see what you have planned with regards to character interactions now, as this adds so many new possible permutations. Some how colorful falls short in describing the cast of characters! As always a pleasure, and I am eagerly anticipating your next update.

person Anon
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet the rest of the bunch are comming into the story 'bout time ;).
please update soon...
person New Fan
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I wonder how Sango and Miroku got to the place that Inuyasah and Sesshoumaru are now? Update soon.
person Gem
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting development. (evil grin) but ok how do they get interrupted this time. Update when you can, we always look forward to it.
person New Fan
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I finally get to read Sess in action. I thought he will never get to fight. I wonder what
Inuyasha and Kagome is doing down stairs??? Will that be revealed in the next chapter? Update soon.
person claudine
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELLO I MUST SAY THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY ITS FUNNY & YET AT THE SAME TIME SEROIS . I LOVED THE PART WHEN INU YASHA CALLED HIS BROTHER THE FLOWER KING THAT WAS TO DIE FOR .I COULD STOP LAUGHING & WHEN THE HORSE LIKES INU YASHA RIDING ON HER . LOL KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB . THANKS TSCHUSS CLAUDINE
person New Fan
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So Sess is blown away on what the future is like. To bad he is not able to wittness it himself. It would
blow his mind. Will Inuyasha have great destinity awaiting him ? Will Rin play an important role, beside
staying beside Sesshoumaru's side? Update soon.
person andross
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOOT AWSOME . u should have a chapter where if they ever get back to japan sesshomaru goes to kagomes time and see's the technology that would be HILARIOUS!