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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
once again I am left dieing for more, you are quite evil, and quite the genious
I eagerly await every update, and after that two week hiatus thought I would go made with anticipation
keep up the excellent work, I can't wait for more!
and just as a side thought, how would the "old wolf" react to the real wolf, kouga?
just an idea I had to give
awesome work
I eagerly await every update, and after that two week hiatus thought I would go made with anticipation
keep up the excellent work, I can't wait for more!
and just as a side thought, how would the "old wolf" react to the real wolf, kouga?
just an idea I had to give
awesome work
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please update again soon. i am so hooked on this story. i think your such a great writer. this was another good chapter and i can wait to find out how inuyashas gonna feel when he wakes up. and i dont mean to sound like a horny but when are inuyasha and kagome going to get it on again? i mean they only just mated so i think they should get some time together. anyway keep up the good work.
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job! This is getting interesting. I'm familiar with Eddings work and look forward to see who you bring into this story. I loved Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru in this chapter. Once again kudos. :)
Cascades
Cascades
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!!! *standing ovation* That was amazing. I loved it. please update soon
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful I loved how you showed everyone Sess's and Inu's hidden talents. It's too bad he got hurt and I'm so happy how Rin brought out Sess's humane side. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. The fighting scene was very good. I could see what was coming up when
you had the Hounds as big as horses that Sess and Inuyasha were going to transform.
It made Pol and the others realize what Sess and Inuyasha really are. Update soon.
you had the Hounds as big as horses that Sess and Inuyasha were going to transform.
It made Pol and the others realize what Sess and Inuyasha really are. Update soon.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to hear from you again. It's always intresting to see what you will come up with next,as you develope your plot very well. Its never rushed from one confontation to the next. Guess you can liken it to a six or seven course meal, where you take the time to fully enjoy each indivdual item, as opposed to fast food. The only "complaint" I have is it just flows so seamlessly that its over way before you want it to be, you leave us wanting more!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy now the true fighting will begin. Great chapter by the way. I did miss your update. i am
glad that you have enjoy your trip in New York. Update soon.
glad that you have enjoy your trip in New York. Update soon.
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! Great interaction and you're still keeping everyone in character. Can't wait for the next chappie!!!!
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
True, the Dryads to tend to be a little homicidal--but in the spirit of fair play I'm sure Belgarath would tell Miroku about the chocolate. They'll give up instinct for chocolate.
God help us, Miroku and Silk as a team? You'll create a monster.
I still love this story to death. I don't presume to try to direct you, but I feel it's time for a little more action. Let Inuyasha, Sessoumaru and Garion have the measure of each other's martial skills. They're an army by themselves and a natural disaster waiting to happen. You could almost feel sorry for Naraku. Not.
God help us, Miroku and Silk as a team? You'll create a monster.
I still love this story to death. I don't presume to try to direct you, but I feel it's time for a little more action. Let Inuyasha, Sessoumaru and Garion have the measure of each other's martial skills. They're an army by themselves and a natural disaster waiting to happen. You could almost feel sorry for Naraku. Not.