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Well whatever the cause it was a very nice surprise to see another update broken up chapter or not. Must say I like how the group interaction is developing. It leads me to believe when the final showdown happens (hopefully not soon! I'm a bit selfish, I don't want this to end for a while) the "getting to know you period" will have determined how well they can funtion as a whole. That is very important, as things very rarely wrap themselves up in nice tidy packages, it takes a lot of work and time to achieve a believable result. I think that is part of the reason I always read and try to leave some comment, no matter how inane, becuse you craft your story to let it mature as it needs, not forcing it from one plot point to another. Plus it is very intersting how you are letting us take a peek into Sess' psyke. The emotional aspect is more developed than the anime original, but I think the logic is very in character. To me it just provides depth. All that and your none to shaby with the action either. Enough ramblings for now. Take care, and may your muse always be happy!

Just read your latest installment. Despite their gruffness with each other, the familial bonds are taking shape and form between Sess/Inu. Great transitionals.

I couldn't abide or stomach the "insta-grow" either for Rin. If you must, do it at your own pace to "grow" her or not. You control the rhythm and pattern of this lovely plot and I do respect that.

It makes me very envious of talent possessed by people such as yourself. I love how you can take words that are ordinarily dull by normal standards and transform them into some kind of wonderful. The vivid "word" pictures are so amazing !!! I am a new fan to this story and thank you..(I'd better be a fan since it's 2:30am at the time of this writing)...;-)

Give Sessy some sake or something. The poor guy is sooooooo confused. With Inu's mood swings, the way his brother has been treating him, the big revilation, and then the mighty powers of the sorcerers. Poor Sessy. And then he had the bad manners to go and play cards with Miroku and Silk. I wanted to bop Inu on the head for being so mean to Kagome. There mated, does he really have to bring in Koga. I loved the action between Belgarith and his brother. That was great and I loved how confused it made Sess. You caputred Inu perfectly on his human nights. Keep up the good work.

i came across your fan fic today and though i am only up to chapter 15 i must say you are a very gifted writer. your fic is very well put together, detailed and well thought out. you have an enormous amount of talent and i hope you continue this fic on to completion. it is really a fantastic story :-)

Lol, if Miroku and Silk start plotting things then the world is in for some major trouble.

This is a very good story. Although I don't really follow the non-Inuywasha cross-over, I am still able to comprehend the plot as it unfolds.
However, my fave pairing has got to be Sess/Rin (adult of course). Very in-characters that you've made them. Are you intending to keep their relationship a paternal one ? (although you did mention that they are each other's soulmates earlier on...).

Very strong creative merit and the grammatics are flawless. Nothing turns a reader off more than nonsensical, non-flowing, unstructured, error-riddled type of gibberish that seems to be in profusion. So when a good gem like this story comes around, it makes the reading much more enjoyable.

Keep up the good work !!!

Inuyasha saved his brother's life? How will Sessy take that. Do Sessy know what danger he really was in?
Will Inuyasha human showing be a secret for long? Will Sess find out his secret? Update soon.

Oooo! The promised show of power! Good battle scene, nice touch with it being brothers fighting. Wonder if seeing that may make our fav Inu brothers step back and think? .... nah. How come I get the sneaking idea that Sess may have to face the unwelcome and very distasteful thought that he is not the top of the food chain so to speak? Think that raw display of power unsettled him just the teeniest bit, even if he does not want to admit it to himself yet. Fun as always.

I LOVE that you released Zedar. The fight with Belgarath was kick-ass awesome!!!! After they killed off all the Bad Sorcerers in the Mallorean, there was really nobody left to give Belgarath and family any real competition. The Inu brothers are just begining to see the magnitude and versatility that this family is capable of. Wait till Inu. and Sessy realize the power Garion is hiding, not to mention the Orb. Until now, Kagome is the only human to have earned any respect from Sessy. He is going to have to rethink his whole idea of "weak Humans." Great chapter, this fic just keeps getting better and better. I also like the possibilities opened with Miroku and Silk teaming up-Mallorea will never be the same! One request, though. Let's see a little more interaction between the two groups. I'd really like to see Garion and Inuyasha become friends. I think that Sessy and Zedar would hit it off as well. Keep the chappies coming!! I can't wait for 23!!!!!

Great lemon!! Sessy's a real hoot, too. I love the way he's fascinated with everything from Kagome's world, but still manages to maintain his dignity. I really like the way you have him being obviously protective of Rin. Usually, he tries to hide this aspect of himself as well, but in these new situations, he has finally let it show. I didn't review the last couple of chapters, but I'll say here that I really enjoyed the fight with the hounds. Thanks for a great ride- I can't wait for the rest of the "journey".