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This is getting so interesting. I just love how this story is turning out. Is Miroku going to get that dance from
Sango? Will Inuyasha going to bust up the party once he finds out about his mate? Will Rin get her revenge
on that nasty little boy who said those mean things about Sesshoumaur? Update soon.

yet another great chapter. i love your fic! keep up the good work and please update again soom.
p.s.
have i mentioned how talented i think you are?
:-) very talented.

Wow quick work of late! Color me impressed. Seems the boys family protective instincts have kicked in with a vengeance. Like how you portrayed Sess's handling of the assassin. Control with deadly intent, he'll get what he needs then dispose of the villain. Can't help but wonder how the gang will react to seeing Kagome at Sesshomaru's side, talk about challenging heir concept of realty! All the political intrigue and plots, very distracting for the characters, you just have to assume everyone is out to get you, put your back against the wall and wait for it. Makes for some interest tension. Oh and I'm betting Ce'nedra is going to get a "talking to" for leaving Kagome on her own, being taken away by some strange man, silly girl. Can't wait to see what you dream up next. 'Til then take care.

Just got back and, yay, two chapters! I don't even know where to start with the bath scene and then the naked butt! Inventive way to get him in the water. tsk tsk Kagome using her womanly wiles, unfair really, its like 'shooting fish in a barrel'. That tiff over the shoes was priceless! I could literally see it, the way you described it and with the background on the suite itself. Then the finishing touch of the peanut gallery walking in, gods I laughed! The next chapter was again an interesting peek into the persoanlities present. Liked how you showed Sess in his element, or more correctly in a often neglected apect of his character. I am also thinking the developing friendship between Inu and Garion is going to prove fun, mabe not as entertaining as Miroku and his new partner in crime (hide the valuable and lock up your daughters as they say), but there is something to work with there. Have fun and keep up the great writing!

So far, even better than I expected. I'm glad you threw in the Gandahar rice dish escapade, it was great seeing Sessy "simmer" (but it made me miss Sadi--sniffle, sniffle). I'm also glad to see the Inuyasha won the shoe fight. He's alot like Belgarath in that he feels he shouldn't have to impress anybody. He has fought so hard his whole life to make himself a place in society and has built up all these walls to protect himself, and now placing him in this court situation has made him uncomfortable enough that he needs to have control of something, even if it is just his wardrobe (or the lack thereof). I really liked him coming to Rin's rescue, and I'll have agree with Garion about Sessy not overhearing. Can't wait for the next chappie!!!!

Too bad that Sesshoumaru was not around when that boy was saying those mean things. I can
see the boy pissing in his pants. What mischief can Inuyasha and Rin get into at the party? Will
Miroku show is preverted side at the party? And when will the party get ruin by Naraku and his minion???
Update soon.

the whole meal scene especially sesshoumaru's reactions were hilarious! so the brothers are not so different? LOL!! i really like the character garion, the godslayer. it seems that inuyasha and he would make good friends. the scene with rin and inuyasha was very touching also. thank you for a wonderful update!

another. keep up the good work. oh and i have a question : is sessy like a father fig. to rin or is waiting till she is old enough to take her? also what is this growing relationship with rin and inu? is it like a bro/sis thind or is becomeing attracted to her?

please dont get offended by my questions i just want to know. and no matter your answer i still love your story.

another wonderful chapter, only way it could have gone better is if fluffy himself hadda heard the cracks being made about him, or if koga had shown up

I do love this story, it's been the only one that's really stood out to me in a long while

As a side note, in regards to your last point, you have at least one nomination *coughs and whistles innocently*

good luck and I will be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter

I loved the scene with the hot bath! It had me rolling on the floor. Poor Sango getting stuck in a reveling dress. Miroku is going to be hopless to live with. You should have had Kagome cry so he would put the shoes on. That always gets to him. I think dog demons have a thing with women crying. They hate it. I can't wait until the feast happens. Rin is going to be so cute during it. I love how you keep all the characters in well character. You balance the action with getting into the characters head well. I'm getting to know Inu and Sess and the rest better then I ever thought I would. Keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next chapter.