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Another great chapter. I am trying to figure out what it this new truce that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru
have? What it Myoga part in this story? The future wife of Sesshoumaru better not be anyone else espect
Rin (once she comes to age). How much does Sess trust Sango and Miroku with Rin? Will they prove there
'loyality' like Inuyasha did when he protected Rin from Kagura? Update soon.

Wow! More updates! I enjoyed your new chapters and I look forward to seeing how Inuyasha comforts Kagome now that she's so upset and since 'punishment' for the 'shoe incident' (and, yes, I still would have loved it if she had smacked his bare bottom!) is out of the question for the time being.

I'm glad that Inuyasha kept his promise to Kagome but I'm disappointed in Sesshoumaru. I was hoping, after he told Inuyasha, [quasi-quote near the end of the chapter] "I see you kept your promise to your mate, little brother," and Inuyasha said, "Yeah, but barely," that Sesshoumaru would say, "Well I made no such promise," and he would take off after the bad guy. But, since I don't know what you plan for the bad guy to do now, and since I really like your story, I guess I won't complain too much or second guess about what you have planned. ~_^

I can't wait to read more. Keep the chapters coming please.

i love how it is turning out and am waiting breathlessly for when it is complete i love it

A lot of great character development in this last chapter. There is just to much to mention in detail. As I have stated before I love how you are filling out Sess' persona. Now we have the caring older brother and diplomat. That little mention of Rin and Inu was perfect, exactly something the charcters would do. I think you have Sango down well, unsure of herself in the social arena but very forcefull when it comes to something she knows. The dance with the two of them was good, that Miroku could charm the scales of a snake if he wanted to! You managed to find a believable way for them to kiss as well, with both of them being off balance and out of their normal comfort zone, just the time for something to happen. Gonna be fun when Inu does find out whats been going on, he is going to be mad at everyone! Take care.

STRONG, STRONG technically well-written chapter but on a more emotionally driven level (and I am an emotional creature), why do I get this feeling that this is evolving into a Sess/Kag plot (I hope that it was something I had for dinner that's upsetting my tummy). It has lost some of the original luster/appeal to me. Please tell me I am wrong...Pleeaaazzzeee...

Their characters would be so misfitted. Inu's childish temperament needs someone like Kag who can anchor him but can give as good as it takes. Likewise, Sess's wiser/more worldly temperament is a better match for Rin. Yin/yang, good/bad, left/right, etc ..these elementals are what make characters interesting.

The characters of Sess and Rin are richer in texture and depth within context of each other based on their strengths and weaknesses and dependency on each other's developmental growth. Ditto for Inu/Kag....

What are your plans on the pairings ? That will help me to know if I should pursue this story further.

Great chapter. I wonder who is the lucky lady Sess would make happy. Does Kagome have a clue on who
she might be? Is Sess waiting for her until she is ready? Sango and Miroku finally got there dance.
I thought that would pass them by. Update soon.

damn i love this story. The development of the characters personalities and relations is quite impressive. Keep it up. Hope to see more!

well first of wanted to say thankyou for bringing a great story to read . i have to say thye way you have made the alternitve world & the people in the story is very powerful writting you cant find people that write like you very often so thankyou for shareing it with everyone on adult fanfic i will look forward to reading more of this story & anymore that you put out & i also sent it to a couple of my friends . so agian thankyou . you bring a new light to some of the people in the series inu yasha .

tschuss

claudine d. hibbard

Oh dear, things are going to be interesting for poor Kagome. When Inu-Yasha finds out what happened to her heads are going to roll. And if Sess ever finds out that thos children hurt Rin's feelings even more heads are going to roll. I loved the scene where Inu made a fool out of himself with the spicey food. Poor Kagome and Sess. I guess dog demons don't like spicy food. I almost bust a gut laughing when you had the two guys go and meet the different royalty and how bad they smelled. You did a great job sneaking in the Monk's point of view. It didn't seem akward or disjointed at all. I can't wait for the next chapter. Things are definatly starting to get interesting here. Congratulations on being nominated for the IY Fan Guild contest. Keep up the great work.

Great chappie! I liked Sessy playing the hero ("Here I Come To SAVE The Day!!!), but Inuyasha is gonna go balistic when he smells Kagome's blood on him. We both know that Inuyasha is the slash first, ask questions later type. Maybe Garion and Zaketh will be able to pull him off Sessy before things get too far out of hand, but it'll probably just take a good "SIT" from his mate. I knew putting Silk and Miroku together was gonna mean trouble, and it seems I was right. At least Silk is keeping Miroku from making the same old social faux paus (I know--my spelling sucks!). Alot of fanfic authors forget the depth in Miroku's character and just concentrate on the hentai portion. I'm glad you gave him the intelligence ( and/or wisdom) to catch something that even Silk missed. I guess they'll be okay as long as they're helping Zaketh, but once Silk trains Miroku a little in the Drasnian cottage industry, there'll be no stopping them!! Keep it coming !! Arigato!!!