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That was a great chapter. I really enjoyed it with Sess and Rin. Rin has a positve impact on him. Now if
he just show some respect to Sango and Miroku and stop scaring Shippo. Update soon.

..another thing.

I was kinda hoping that once Inuyasha caught up with the 'ass', he would've insinuated that he made a promise to his mate not to kill him...but his brother made no such promise.

It would have been nice to read.

as always your chapters are wonderful. keep up the good work and post more chapters soon.

great chapter!!! oh and yeah i guess i have mentioned it before. i guess i'll have to come up with a better complement :-)

how's this: (i think your a wonderfully skilled writter)

plz update again soon.

Another great two chapters. You keep updating them too fast for me to keep up! I adored the last two chapters though. You did a great job with Sango's point of view. I know you were worried about it but it was great. I loved how Polgara got to play matchmaker, we need more of that in this story. And that man is incredibly lucky that Inu Yasha dindn't fully transform and that Kagome begged for his life. Rin and Inu Yasha dancing was soooo cute. I could see it perfectly in my minds eye. The plot thickens even more. Inu is not going to let Kagome out of his sight for a while now. I bet anything that Miroku and poor Sango are going to get stuck in more embarrasing positions. I felt so sorry for Kagome when Inu Yasha geve her that big fright. He was a meany!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Sess is such a single-tracked, focused dude when it comes to protecting his honor, his family, and his name. So COOL ! He's such a machine.

Thank you also for writing in a little more interaction between Rin and him and the clarification of the pairings.

Where do you get your inspiration ?!??!?! It's been an amazing story.

Sorry if double post!
I've read your work straight through and I have to say I'm hooked. The Edding group is unfamiliar to me but I just might have to check it out:) I think you made the right decision about Inuyasha and Sess. Inu would feel the need to kill but his half human side and Kag would stop him. (more Kag then anything else) Sess is a little talkitive to me but this is yours. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Thanks

have i mentioned that i think you are way talented?

anyway that was some awsome writting, cant wait for the next chapter.

keep up the good work and update again soon:-)

Bliss! I am so enjoying the fast updates ( reading is my treat to myself after work, and its been very nice to have had this waiting for me so to speak, mind you, quality is worth waiting for). I see you have Inu growing as a character as well. It's amazing how having to think of another person before yourself can bring out the best in someone. Using Kagome as his motivation works. The whole group dynamic is shifting, and I must say I like the direction your taking it. It still has the classic pairings ( I still like those the best), but I think the pack will grow stonger because of it. Til next time.

Revenge is a dish best served hot , bloody, and dripping with terror!! I knew Inuyasha would jump to the wrong conclusion when he smelled Kagome's blood on Sessy, but I'm glad their relationship has progressed enough that he actually managed to ask questions first. The hunt was outstanding, though. I just knew Kagome was gonna keep him from killing the bastard. Oh well, can't have Inuyasha killing humans in cold blood, even if they do deserve it. I like that Inuyasha noticed the lack of fear in Belgarath, can't have dog-boy getting too high and mighty (Sessy is bad enough!). I didn't get a chance to review the last couple of chapters, but I wanted to let you know that I appreciated your portrayal of Sango. She's so fierce and yet feminine at the same time. She could kick any man or demon's ass, but still gets all shy and gushy over a simple dance. The kiss between her and Miroku was perfect--spontaneous yet promising (if he doesn't blow it!). Keep the chappies coming. I can't wait to see how the other spies fit in and who they're stupid enough to mess with. After what Inuyasha did to their friend, they're gonna have a hard time talking themselves into going after the jewel shards.