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person New Fan
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What is going on with Rin?? She is one of them? If she is then how powerful is she? Poor
Sess, he has not a clue what female women goes through? What will the other people in the
group think of Rin's new power?? Update soon.
person Miroku2235
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rin can use the Will and the Word? Wicked! Never saw that twist coming.
person lee
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that Inuyasha gets a chance to do some damage to the bad guys. Hah! like daggers can kill him. I was giggling at your scene with the picture phone. I can see Sessy with a curious child-like wonder on some of Kagome's items. It is great.

I do hope you get to show off Sango and Miroku fighting technigues to the Eddings characters.

Great story so far. Keep it up.
person littleolmee
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! i'm gone a week and come back and look at all the chapters! loved how the party went. the interaction between kagome and sesshoumaru was a wonderful to read. liked sango and miroku's little moments as well. it is really interesting on how sesshoumaru and inuyasha's relationship is changing, like how you pointed out how inuyasha noticed how similar he and his brother's looks are when he saw the picture. still loving your story! keep up the great work!
person andross
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol you need more nifty future items too show sesshomaru lol his reactions are priceless. the tai-youkai looking like a curios inuyasha LOL.
person New Fan
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. When will the real fight going to begin involving everyone? When will they
reach Naraku? What traps are in story for our heros? Update soon.
person SP777
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Last review, then I'll just SIT back and enjoy the show...

Big smile....B-I-G smile! I'm glad that situation was dealt with Sesshoumaru-style....and actually the fact Inuyasha respected his mate's wishes shows his deep love for her more than growth. Shoot! Any demon that goes through a hissy-fit over some damn shoes NEEDS to grow up, after all it was JUST one night.

That's another thing, you hadn't run across any pictures of an older Inuyasha, that's something I've yet seen people do.
Now, I've seen someone do a professional drawing of a half-naked Sesshoumaru wearing nothing but his fur pelt and yellow sash [*blush*] but that's a different subject.

Oh and speaking of His Sexiness...I see he has noticed that Rin is developing into a young lady, question is how will he approach it? Will he distance himself or allow the females in the pack to handle the situation? Because Rin hasn't had a female role model to emulate.
person Lee
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story. I usually don't read crossovers but I think it was a great idea to link Eddings' world with Inuyasha. I was wondering if you are gonna make Zakath single or married to Cyradis as in the Malloreon series? And if you did use Cyradis would you have her use powers? I think that would throw Sessy into a loop.

I like the brother bonding relationship between the two demons. I always figure they were more bark than bite. (Although, I wouldn't mind getting a few bites from either one of them.) I definitly believe their growing respect for each other would only make them stronger and one tough team to defeat. Naraku will sure have his hands full.

I love the love scenes with Kagome and Inuyasha. I enjoy the dance with Miroku and Sango and that kiss was magical. Will there be love scenes with them?

And will we see Kikyo? I think she will keep Polgara on her toes, not beat her just enough to raise her eyebrow.
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is THE BEST plain and simple a perfect mix between the two stories. I hope to see new chapters out soon, but theres no rush.
person SP777
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
New person on the block...I found your story by accident while looking for something on a search engine.

The summary made me curious, because any story that has Inuyasha & Sesshoumaru in it will draw me....that and the fact I long to see [but I don't think it will happen in the anime now that's it over & Ms. Takahashi gives no guarantees for certain] the 2 Inu brothers ACTUALLY come to some understanding and BECOME brothers.

Because I've always felt Sesshoumaru's animosity was more of jealousy & aristocratic breeding that demons, especially those who are high-class, are MORE superior than humans.

Oh and another thing...can you give a brief summary of who is who....I know NOTHING of the David Edding's series and can't get the names straight.