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loven it as always!! anyway i have a question. 1. how old is rin in this story? and 2. please dont think i'm a hentai for asking this but is rin and sessy going to be getting it on because she is a "woman" now?

i mean i know back in the day as soon as women got there first period they were married off. anyway i'm just curious nothing more.
i hope your not offended by this type of question i just wanted to know.

anyway love your story update again soon.

it is so awesome i love your story and i can't wait for you to update you have a great talent keep it up

wonderful chapters, so rin has a gift? that is a very interesting twist you have added. can't wait to see how sesshoumaru is going to react to this. loved how the birds were helping her with her crown. poor inuyasha still worrying about if he is good enough. i really enjoyed garion and inuyasha's talk, so garion feels like he is a monster? those two just go good together. like how you came back to explain the light when kagome and inuyasha mated, great pick up! like how myouga has made his appearance, slept the whole time lol! can't wait to see what you have in mind next! keep up the good work and take care!

What I can get from Garion comment to Inuyasha, Rin might be very powerful. Poor Sess he just don't know what to make of it.
When will the other socessors find out about Rin? Will Naraku find out about Rin too from his spies around the palace? It seems
natural that Rin powers will be connect to nature. Update the story soon.

It took me two days to read your entire story so far!!! ;D Grammatically, your chapters are perfect. Content wise, this is the first cross over I have really gotten into, and you are doing a fine job in developing all the characters. I am curious though: everyone is fighting, but Kagome has yet to kick some ass. Is it possible that she will in the future? And wonderful job developing all of the relationships! It's very steady, and I wish there were more to read! Looking forward to your next chappie, and hoping to read more "Curious Sesshoumaru" moments!


anrehah



btw- Has anyone done fanart for this? I would love to see the picture of Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru on the camera drawn out... :D

I MUST SAY AGIAN YOU DID A GREAT JOB I LOVE YOUR STORY . ITS GREAT THAT YOU HAVE MODE IT LIKE THEY HAVE ALL BECOME LIKE A FAMILY ITS FUN TO SEE HOW INU YASHA & HIS BROTHER ACTING THAT IN THAT WAY . I KNOW IN THE THIRD MOVIE & A COUPLE OF EP OF INU YASHA AT THE END THEY HAD DONE SOME STIFF TOGEATHER BUT NOT AT LIKE THE WAY YOU HAVE PUT IT IN YOUR STORY . SO AGIAN I MUST SAY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK & THANKS FOR THE UP DATE . I JUST CANT GET ENOUGH OF THIS STORY .

TSCHUSS

CLAUDINE

& I FORGOT TO0 SAY THANKYOU FOR WRITTING BACK TO ME AT THE END OF YOUR STORY THANKYOU .;)

TSCHUSS CLAUDINE

Lots of things happening since I last had a chance to check in. It looks like you have some very interesting ideas for future chapters that you are setting up for. Something for Kagome and Inuyasha that Myoga will reveal and this last chapter leaves us with the idea Rin is coming into powers as well. I think I'll just mention again how much I like the way you pay attention to the background, you give a very good picture of the places involved without over doing it. It adds so much to the depth of the story and enhances what the characters are doing. In many cases it helps us to see why they may behave in certain ways and how the interact with their surroundings gives insight into the characters, ( how everyone deals with the kittens for example). Plus it just rounds out the story, gives it yet another layer, adding to the overall depth. Your whole writing is very well balanced that way, each element given its proper weight. As always, a most pleasant read. Take care.

People are going to die. That's all there is to it. Rin is in pain and Sesss can't make it stop. Things are going to be destroyed unless someone can tell him what's going on. I feel for poor Rin, it's so painful your first time. I really enjoyed the interplay between Sess and Kagome, we know whose Alpha in this pack. I loved the possessive Inu Yasha and the nice leomon. When will these people learn that upsetting dog demons is detremntal to your health. Stupid Narkau. You are so going down. Can't wait for the next update.

What a great chapter! Not only was it a tender and sweet scene with Kagome explaining on becoming a woman to Rin, but the idea that Rin has the Will and the Word talent like Polgara and the others is awesome. I wonder if her blossoming talent brought on her first menstrual cycle? And will her talent somehow help the group in their quest against Naraku?

Thumbs up on spanking Rin's bully. Little jerk deserved it.

Keep posting. I can't wait to read more.