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I really like the relationship that seems to growing between the brothers. Seems theyre getting closer but in the same voice they also need to keep each other at bay in a way, distant. Almost to the point where they just tolerate each other. I do love the voiced battle they do go thru, tho, lol. As in when they were fighting, throwing insults at one another. In a different direction, I wonder exactly how trust-worthy Silk actually is. Silk and Miroku? lol, partners in crime? I see where as the Old Wolf seems to trust him, but it dont look like the brothers really do tho.
And is Koga coming in the picture soon? That should be interesting to say the least. On the part of both brothers.
I do have a question about Rin. I have read, and Im trying to find it in the manga, about what exactly happened to Rin. When she died I mean, when Sesshomaru revived her. I thought it was by wolves and then someone in a group I belong to, answered a question by someone else that said her demise came by the hands of bandits. I thought that as odd, cuz I thought her parents were done in by bandits but not her. I dont know.
But still, another great chapter. When will you be updating again?

Sorry I haven't had a chance to review lately!! I've still been following closely, though, and I still just love this fic-plain and simple. I especially like the way Inu and Garion's relationship is progressing. I just knew those two would hit it off, considering how much alike they really are. The thing with Rin being a sorceres is a really good idea. It always kinda bothers me that with all Sessy's strength, he would pick an ordinary human for a mate. Even if it is for love, she would eventually feel so inferior to him that it would make her(and thus him) unhappy. However, with the introduction of powers, she will become more of his equal and thus a better match--that is if he figures out what's going on.

Great fights scenes!!! I especially liked Inu's attack on the men in their room. I loved him basically laughing in the dagashi's face. the fight scene in this chapter was incredible, though. You choriographed it so well that I could practically hear the swords ringing and Inuyasha screaming his attacks in the background. I've also noticed that your descriptive talents have definitely improved since you started this fic. Don't get me wrong, they were very good to begin with, but they've just gotten better. You've really gotten into your zone! keep it coming! I can't wait to see everyone's reaction to Kagome's secret.

Oh yeah, one question. Where did Belgarath and company find Miroku, Sango, and Shippo's names? I'm assuming, like in the Belgariad, that the twins deciphered some of the prophecy, or did Aldur just contact Belgarath with the informaton when he gave him instructions about Ashaba?

I think that Miroku should stop playing the 'hard to get' game and be himself. He
did not keep up that charade for long before he broke. I think it was good to let the
group know about Kagome and her 'secret'. Now, they can be there for each other more
efficiently. Now, why did that she-wolf saved Rin knowing how Sess and Rin feels about
her? Will Miroku use his wind tunnel? I hope so, so that the other can be aware on what
he can do. Update soon.

oooo.. forshadowing ^^ I'm in love. :laughs: So Miro' is learning Secret languages huh? That can't fair well for Sango's rear ::laughs:: He and Silk are gonna have their fill of Sango ass tonight!
Anywho! Keep it up! Love it to bits and pieces as usual!

~~Sami-chan

wonderful chapters as always. so the others with the power of the word are going to figure out about rin soon won't they? being pol left rin there with her. i just love inu and garion's interactions and now miroku and silk, lol!

I feel for the brothers right now. Sess is worried about Rin and can do nothing to help her, something he is not used to at all. Inuyasha has to worry about Miroku and his new playmate, well everyone should worry about that pair! I understand why the brothers don't want to ask Polgara about what's happening to Rin, but really you think they would relax just a little and ask some questions. Shards huh, I'm thinking there may be some intense action ahead, can't wait. Enjoyed the introspective moment between Garion and Inuyasha, they do share common ground.

I wonder what Rin's first use of her will is going to be? And poor Miroku, now that Sango knows the he's learning the Drasnain secret language, if he wiggles his fingers she'll smack him for something he MIGHT have said.

regarding Chapter #33....

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A TV comes into view and a Feudal Era-styled Hallmark commercial appears onto the screen.

We see Inuyasha walk into frame...

Inuyasha: You know some families express their love through...family get-togethers...gifts or on pieces of colorful paper with some poetry written on it that almost cost you an arm & a leg to purchase. But not in my family, my brother & I do things differently...

*Inuyasha turns to Sesshoumaru who walks into frame*

Inuyasha: You know what, I think you are the MOST egotistical bastard I ever laid eyes on. NO one does pompous ass like you.

Sesshoumaru: Thank you Inuyasha...and I think you can be the most INSUFFERABLE half-breed without trying. I can honestly say I had NEVER met a demon full or half who ever made me go out of my way to MAKE me help them cease to exist in this life.

*brief pause*

Sesshoumaru: oh wait...there is Naraku, but I can honestly say there is NO love there. *growls*

Inuyasha: ditto. *frowning*

*voiceover from Kagome*

Show them that you care done the Inu way...express yourself with *ahem* heartfelt words....and a *blow* to the kisser to emphasize what you truly feel.

-This Feudal Era Hallmark commercial was brought to you by Doggy-style Productions. *woof*


PS: for what it's worth I haven't lost my mind..it hit me after reading that 'tender' moment about brotherly love with Inuyasha, Kagome & Myouga.
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Now to be serious...I had been wondering how Rin fit into the Prophecy now I SEE....I take it her gifts have something to do with nature?

Oh yeah, call me sappy but anymore heartfelt moments between the 2 Inu brothers soon? The one where Inuyasha did his confession on the Moonless Night kinda got to me.

Now why does Miroku wants to learn that sign language? I hope not to bother Sango.Garion is
such a sad soul. I hope through this adventure he would stop putting himself down and accept
what he is. This hope also goes towards Inuyasha. I also feel for Rin as well. It seem that
she interupted Pol's connection with the big bird. Is Rin that powerful to interupt a Pol's magic?
Pol is much more experience than Rin when using her gift, its amazing she was powerful enough
to interept Pol. Update soon.

This is really a good story. Really like how you put the different characters together, how they are and how they act. I read all the way to last chapter thus far. Next question....whens the next update?