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person KJ
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!!!
evil evil cliffhanger!!!!! put up the next one soon... or I'll do something eeeebil, yea
it was another good one, REALLY good one, I want more, I need more, I'm getting addicted to this story, withdrawl is setting in!

eagerly awaiting more, and threatening if it takes to long ^.^
person littleolmee
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapters, amazing how much money can get you huh? wish i could make money out of air. loved garoin and inuyasha's drink time, wonderfully written. along with sesshoumaru's and inuyasha's little talk.
person alize
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!! you left a cliffy! please pleae please update again soon!!! that was great but please dont leave me hangging for long.
person Miroku2235
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO! NOT A CLIFFY! Argh! I want to see how this turns out! I can't handle the wait, please update soon!
person Gem
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Powerful things coming. Its getting darker out there. I think I'll just sit back and hang on. Never a dull moment with you directing the ebb and flow.
person New Fan
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What spell did you put on Inuyasha and Rin? Or better yet, what is happening to Inuyasha
and Rin when they were in that creapy forest? Was their companions effected as well? Did this
spell only effect people who are suffering with deep issues. For an example, Rin is having troble
ajusting to her new found power, Inuyasha always had a self-loathing attitude
toward his self and Garion with his self-loathing as well. But apparently,Garion has not been affected
by this power. Great chatper, update soon.
person SoutasSister
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm still following your wonderful story. Ooooo, I can't wait to see who is possessing Inuyasha and if he can overcome it himself or if Sesshoumaru will have to knock it out of him. Poor Inuyasha and poor Kagome! Keep the chapters coming! Thanks!
person Mina
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffhanger??? I wonder hat possessed Inuyasha to do such a thing to Kagome. I hope Sesshomaru kick his ass. Well, I guess I just have to wait and see what happen to this amazing story!
person Nightclaw42
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing. This story is one of the best I've seen so far. Chapter before last actully made me want to cry as well written as it was. Your portrayl of the Inuyasha cast is the most in-character I have ever seen. I just found this fic and now I'm hooked. However something ocurred to me. In the scene where Kagome is putting shoes on Inuyasha I had a thought. I don't think Inuyasha wears shoes for an very specific reason. They hurt his feet. While watching an episode if Inuyasha at one close-up of Shippo; in the backround you can see 'Yashas feet and the toes had claws. It seem most human made shoes would force the claws back into his toes. Sess wears shoes but I figured that they were made to allow for this. So in reason Inuyasha would not wear shoes as they hurt and most likely make him clumsy. You find that you have better grip with bare feet and 'Yasha with his battle ridden lifestyle need any advantage he can get. Perhaps later you can put in a scene where Inuyasha explains to Kagome why he didn't want to wear the shoes. How they come that topic I leave to you. Other then that keep up the good work.

P.S: I looooooove the scenes between Sess and Inu.
person Ed808
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow Sess is really letting out his feelings! (Which is CooL!) Anyways,this is a great story, and i hope to see the next chapter.