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person Miroku2235
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! Wow, that was a pretty deep scene between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. I never suspected it was Grolim's using mind tricks. Great twist. It was pretty funny when Miroku wanted to keep eavesdropping and Sango was getting pissed. Keep up the great work!
person Gem
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intense. Whoever did the mind control best pack up and leave and don't stop moving. There will be hell to pay - at the very least. One another note, the strength of character shown in this last chapter is fantastic. All of them seem to be getting stronger as well as drawing closer to each other. They'll be one hell of a team by the time they reach the bad guys.
person New Fan
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inuyasha. I really felt his pain when he realized that he hurt Kagome. What really
surprise me is when Sessy tried to comfort his baby brother. The turmoil that Inuyasha
was dealing with to the point he wanted to die; to have his brother kill him was very emotional
and very sad. I knew that Kagome was going to forgive him, unlike Kikyo. She just have that
forgiving heart. I wonder what Sess was feeling when he was comforting Inuyasha? What
was running through his mind? Update soon.
person Nightclaw42
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay more Inu/Sess goodness. Poor Inuyasha, being manipulated like that. He just can't get a break. The scene with Sess purring to him was so cute.(was that a purr?). Big bro looking out for little bro. You almost feel sorry for Naraku(NOT!). Sess is going to feed him his own organs for this new low. Anychance of us seeing what Sess saw during the whole ordeal? Keep up the good work.
person Ed808
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is truly one of the best if not best story i have ever read. It is quite amazing how you blend love, humor, adventure, drama, and sex perfectly into a strong plot. I'm also itching for the next chapter, keep it up! :P
person inuyashaloverr
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is so not fair. CLIFFY!! You left us with a CLIFFY?!? Thats it, I just know youre just sitting there laffin cuz you left us with a cliffy.
person inuyashaloverr
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
40? Did someone say they read chapter 40? Latest chapter Ive got is 38. Hey, I got robbed here...sniff, sniff...
person SP777
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, enjoyed chapter #40...can't wait for the free-for-all as Sesshoumaru subdues Inuyasha the Inu way.

Second, as an author do read other people's stories or do you avoid them until you're finished with yours....and...uhh if you DO read recommend any good Sess/Rin ones or with Inuyasha, Kag', Sesshoumaru & Rin?
person SP777
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grammar corrections*

as an author do 'you' read other people's stories or do you avoid them until you're finished with yours....and...uhh if you DO read them, any recommendation on any good Sess/Rin ones or with Inuyasha, Kag', Sesshoumaru & Rin?
person IamReven
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kami!! Didn't see that coming!! I'm speechless!! Looks like Naraku has learned a few grolim tricks. Apparently someone pretty powerful is helping him because not only has he never tried possession before, but it would take some pretty significant powers to get Inuyasha to attack Kagome--just a mere suggestion wouldn't do it. Is he also trying something with Garion? He had the dreams, too. I can't wait to read the outcome--Great Cliffie!! Ya know, Garion's Alorn blood must really be kicking in. Seems like he would recognize the dreams significance since he was controlled by Asharack(sp?), taunted by Torak, and watched Zandramas possess Cenedra in much the same way. I guess the liquor was already kicking in. Poor Inuyasha, he is really gonna hate himself when he realizes what he tried to do. Thank Kami for Sessy(here I come to save the day--again)!!!