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Thing are sure moving fast, and a new direction in the plot. It seems Rin is to play a major part as well. I can't believe how seamlessly you can move from emotional turmoil, to playfullnes and tenderness to kick-ass fight scenes, it all flows so well from one to the other. It gives the strange feeling that it could continue forever but at the same time ends far to quickly. I guess as a reader I get caught up in the story. I'd love to be able impart some useful advice or helpful comments, but you sure don't need them at all! Thanks for the last great installments.

Wow I reread the last chapter and realized you gave
RIN the SAME POWER as SESSHY to TELEPORT
how cool is that !!!!!! so I guess he is going to be pissed off for awhile
as he tries to come to grips with this
go easy on Rin she is really going to blame herself for his injures
and so is inuyasha
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER * wipes eyes of tears*
*sighs* must wait patiently

Now that was a great chapter. Loved the battle scene very much, I agree with Silk, Mimbrates are crazy. He's probably sad cause he couldn't take a shot at the demon himself. Rin finally used her Will! YAY! Can't wait to see where this goes. Keep up the good work.

D'oh! Shippou was with Pol! I forgot about that with all the drama with Inuyasha and Kagome. I can't wait for the big discussion about to take place. They'll all have to spill their guts about Rin, about Kagome being from the future, about their powers, etc. and hopefully the diverse band of warriors will have a greater understanding of each other and more trust all around. And there's still the 'shoes punishment' to come too! ~_^

WOW GREAT chapter
it was long but so good
I got about half way and was like this is taken forever then all on a sudden it was over* starts to cry*
I love the rin moments and her trying to protect her lord instead of herself PRICELESS
CAN'T WAIT CAN'T WAIT
UPDATE SOON

That was a long chapter. I really enjoyed this one. Not to say that I did not enjoyed the others!!
Well, it seems that our little Rin has shown her powers. Is it that all to her power or is she more?
Its seems to me that Rin could not control her power, so her power send her to Pol and the others instead of
Kagome? She is going to feel really guilty that she could not help or save Sess for getting hurt.
Poor Sessy. Now, he is the one that is hurt and has to be taken care of. He will be even worst of
a patient then Inuyasha. Poor Miroku. I wonder what punishment Sess is thinking of giving our
wonderful monk? Kouga will show up?? I hope so. Maybe he will need Ayame to help get over
losing Kagome. Great chapter and please update soon. ^_^

Wow! Another enjoyable chapter...Miroku such a perv^_^ Will there be a Sango and Miroku romance in the air?

Great chapter. I am glad that Inuyasha is starting to be his self again. I know that it will
take some time to heal, but once he start giving pay back for has happen to him, then
he will feel a whole lot better. How does Kagome feel personally? Does she have the feeling
of revenge like Inuyasha and Sess? So, the Grolim wants Rin or does Naraku? Do they want
her as bait or does they see something in her that can be of some use? Update soon.

you are good, extremely good
I'm loving your work more and more, please, I beg to whatever god I can that you keep up this great story! You mix in humor so seemlessly, it really does make each chapter that much more enjoyable. I just wish I had half the skills you do. My biggest complaint so far, no Koga, no Rin antics in far too many chapters *hint poke hint*, and I will beg to see fluffy in a really tender moment, probably easiest to be done with either Rin, or Kagome, although Rin seems far more likely.

I eagerly await our next fix!

^.^

At last the explanation for the shoes^^ Miroku is definatly pushing his luck with his spying. If Inu doesn't disimbowl(did I spell that right?) him Sess will. Oh were off to hunt Naraku, the pain in the ass Naraku! Because because because... of the horrible things he does.Hee hee