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person New Fan
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its good to know that Sess can be humerous to the point that he is scary. ^_^
I love how you express Inuyasha deep concern for Kagome and for her to tell Belgarth
about her time. Miroku and Sango are getting closer. Its about time!! I was wondering
when it will be there turn instead of Inuyasha and Kagome. To bad Rin is not old enough.
But I guess that will happen when she and Sess confesses their love (when she older).
This story is getting better and better. I just can not wait to read
what happens next. You tell this story so well in such a short period of time that
you are amazing. Update soon.
person an anti_sheep chesse muffin
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this sounds like an interesting story, i like the way u write
person Mina
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha so sweet for looking after his brother ^_^
Rin's amulet so cool, the image of Sesshomaru true form. Can't wait for the next chapter so update soon.
person Dimepieceleo
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another excellent chapter I am puzzled by something but will remain silent about them for now
I am going to say that I was shocked by Sesshy 's easy acceptance of Pol's gift and explaination
I am definitly happy with the way inuyasha and kagome behaved. itreally shows their bond with one another
AGAIN CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CAHPTER AND IS DYING TO KNOW THE RANGE OF RIN'S POWER
person New Fan
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. The amulet that Rin wears with the image of Sessy true form,
does it have any great significates beside the fact that Sess would accept it more because
it shown his true form? Kouga appearance in the story will not be pretty? What does
that mean? Will it happen soon (like in the next couple of chapters)? Forming one huge
pack. OOoooh boy! Like to see how everyone is going to get along now that Belgarth 'spelling'
had suggested that. Does that means that Sess can not harm Miroku because they are now
'brothers'??!! LOL!! ^_^

How do you come up typing 10+ pages and releasing them in two days? Do you have
an outline that you follow? Did you wrote the story already and you just post them every
two day? I find it amazing that you can write this story with such great detail and the plot is
just so easy to follow, it can only be a gift from GOD. Because I could not accomplished
writing a chapter with so much detail that flows so well as you have throughout this story.
Can not wait until you update soon.
person Maggie
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually read stories where some of the main characters include Shessy and Rin, but I think I should! You make their interaction so touching but still believe for their character. Shessy is so cute when it somes to protecting Rin; willing to tear anyone apart who even makes the slightest bit of sound. And I'm forever and Inu/Kag fan so I'm happy to see some of them in here as well! I thought it was really cute when she went up behind him and covered him eyes, saying "Guess who?" Lol. The part sticks out for m and its just cute ^^ I only got to read three chapters but I alread love your story--its soooo late here so I'll continue tomorrow ^^ And I think I may just wanna check out this story that the other characters are from, that sword interests me! Thanks for the good reading at four o'clock in the morning ((always a joy ^^)) Much love!!
person Miroku2235
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Nice job on Rin's amulet, love the design you put on it. Belgarath is right though, if an imp was that powered up from a single shard, imagine a Demon Lord with a shard, or maybe multiple shards. Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!!!
person Mina
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story getting better and better...so much action. I hate Rin...well not really. I'm just jealous of her...she has everything. She has new powers and she has the hottest demon lord taking care of her! So jealous ^_~ I love how Sesshomaru, even injured will not rest till Rin was found...I just love them.
person SP777
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Must comment on chapter 41...

Finally..FINALLY...we have some ACTION!!! I didn't realize how much I missed the fight scenes until I read it, I glad you explained where everyone else went because I was like 'just where DID they go???'

Oh, I'm glad we have a lil' extra glimpse of a 'small something' that Rin can do.

...and for a second I thought you had snapped Sesshoumaru's vertabrae...I was like 'what tha' hell!?! She can't have our Demon Lord disabled!!!' But it's ALL good! :-]

..you came with it.
person CollegGirl
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inu, makes you want to cuddle him and kill the stupid Grolims. GRRRRRRRRR!!! I loved the battle scene and the Tetsuiga's new power was an awesome suprise. Poor Sessy, had to get himself hurt really bad and then Rin disapperaing on him like that. I'm glad she finally got to use her powers now. Poor Pol is going to have her hands full with Sessy' as a paitent. I hate to be in thier shoes when they tall everyone about Rin's power though. Sessy's going to be in denial big time for a while. I loved how he wouldn't give up until he knew that Rin was okay, very cute. Can;t wait for the next chappie!