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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why all of the sudden Miroku is being 'scared' when he is around Sango. He is confusing
the poor girl. He been wanting her for so long, now that the door has open he is shying away.
I do not get him. Its about time that Kagome understands Inuyasha's feelings when it comes
to protecting his mate. She grows up in a world that makes women independent from men, that
we as women does not realize that its ok to have a man wanting to protect us, not because we are
weak, but that we are precious to them and they do not want to lose us or want us to get hurt.
I think Kagome finally gets it. I wonder what Rin's training will bring out of Rin? Will Sess be threaten
by Rin's new powers? Powerful and wonderful chapter. I will be starting school new Friday, I hope that
I will be able to find the time to read fanfics. I will make the special effort to read your fic. Update soon.
the poor girl. He been wanting her for so long, now that the door has open he is shying away.
I do not get him. Its about time that Kagome understands Inuyasha's feelings when it comes
to protecting his mate. She grows up in a world that makes women independent from men, that
we as women does not realize that its ok to have a man wanting to protect us, not because we are
weak, but that we are precious to them and they do not want to lose us or want us to get hurt.
I think Kagome finally gets it. I wonder what Rin's training will bring out of Rin? Will Sess be threaten
by Rin's new powers? Powerful and wonderful chapter. I will be starting school new Friday, I hope that
I will be able to find the time to read fanfics. I will make the special effort to read your fic. Update soon.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks. i think my names quiet funny. I usually never read fanfics, or read at all for that matter, but this storys great. I've never actually read the belgariad series, but i've read like five chapters of the fifth book, and i must say silk was my favorite character in it. I can't wait to read the next chapter, keep it coming.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the new chapters! keep them coming and i must say this story can become huge i mean its 47 chapters LONG ONES at that an they havnt even got to naraku yet! ur sooo me hero lol btw i cant wait to see kouga get all mad inyuasha got kagome but hey maybe he will relize amaya or how ever u spell her name :P
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! i'm gone for a while and look at all the wonderful chappies i come back too! very good work tieing rin into the crossover, her first time at using her gift was a great idea on your part. inuyasha and sesshoumaru just keep getting closer as brothers, i personally enjoy seeing that in a story with those two. the developing relationship betweeen sango and miroku is very nice touch as well, nice to see you didn't leave them out. your story just keeps getting better the farther you take us, can't wait to see where you take us from here.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I can officially say I was lost, during the explanation Belgarath gave to Kagome & Inuyasha about Nahaz and Morjda...*sigh* that happens when you're not familiar with a particular book series, but I got the jest of it.
I liked the 'sweetness of Miroku and Sango', if he would be less of a lecher and more of a gentleman, she would have been his girl by now. Hmm...Miroku+gentleman= not in this lifetime. Well maybe...
I, also, liked the downtime between Shippou and Kagome....
You know I was thinking WHEN is Kagome going to get a clue about 'the ways' of what it means to be a mate? In other words, does she NOT understand that her mate, as the male, is RESPONSIBLE for her well being??? Will she ever learn to defer to Inuyasha and not 'buck up to him' so to speak when they argue [in general] or just respect his wishes when he feels strongly about something.
I understand she is a 20th century girl, but with her being in the Feudal Era I'd think she would have a clue by now. Because twice she has 'blurted out' about her connection with the future WITHOUT consulting her mate about what to say and how much to say.
If it was me, I would respect my mate's role in the relationship and talked to him first...and came to some agreement. Does any of this make sense?
Oh, another thing, I meant to mention this 2 chapters ago since you mentioned 'Heat'...I don't know how long you've been around AAF.net to see this but I have a story for you. I normally don't do this...but there is an AU Sesshoumaru/Rin story called 'Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice'. Now, I'm not one for sexual abuse of any kind..and this one gets deep AND it's dark, but it was SOOO well written [plus I was curious about why it had so many hits] that you couldn't help but keep reading it to the end. Plus I never in my life wanted to reach in a computer screen and actually WANT to beat a character to death...literally. But check it out, you won't be sorry and if the 'Infamous AFF.net crash' didn't mess up the text too much, it shouldn't be hard to read.
*whew* nuff said...
I liked the 'sweetness of Miroku and Sango', if he would be less of a lecher and more of a gentleman, she would have been his girl by now. Hmm...Miroku+gentleman= not in this lifetime. Well maybe...
I, also, liked the downtime between Shippou and Kagome....
You know I was thinking WHEN is Kagome going to get a clue about 'the ways' of what it means to be a mate? In other words, does she NOT understand that her mate, as the male, is RESPONSIBLE for her well being??? Will she ever learn to defer to Inuyasha and not 'buck up to him' so to speak when they argue [in general] or just respect his wishes when he feels strongly about something.
I understand she is a 20th century girl, but with her being in the Feudal Era I'd think she would have a clue by now. Because twice she has 'blurted out' about her connection with the future WITHOUT consulting her mate about what to say and how much to say.
If it was me, I would respect my mate's role in the relationship and talked to him first...and came to some agreement. Does any of this make sense?
Oh, another thing, I meant to mention this 2 chapters ago since you mentioned 'Heat'...I don't know how long you've been around AAF.net to see this but I have a story for you. I normally don't do this...but there is an AU Sesshoumaru/Rin story called 'Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice'. Now, I'm not one for sexual abuse of any kind..and this one gets deep AND it's dark, but it was SOOO well written [plus I was curious about why it had so many hits] that you couldn't help but keep reading it to the end. Plus I never in my life wanted to reach in a computer screen and actually WANT to beat a character to death...literally. But check it out, you won't be sorry and if the 'Infamous AFF.net crash' didn't mess up the text too much, it shouldn't be hard to read.
*whew* nuff said...
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a lot happening in these last chapters. We get to see a glimpse of just how much Sess cares for Rin, how she may play a large role in everyones future. We also get an idea just what, and why the native members of the group have invested in this quest. Everyone has a very good reason to see Naraku destroyed. (It'll just take Inu a little while to let that filter through his protective pig headedness) And Sess laying down the law to Miroku while enjoying it was a great touch, just keeps the monk off balance nicely, Kami knows that couldn't hurt! So loved the Sango/Miroku scene at the end. She was protrayed perfectly again, changing from strong and defensive to shy in an instant and back to take charge agian. Glad to see Miroku's monk training in contol finaly being put to good use! GASP No groping! About time! Can't wait till Rin starts her training, so much potential there for all kinds of things to happen.It also makes me wonder just what poor Kouga is in for if and when he shows up. I'm sure Our Lady Wolf will make her displeasure known if she finds out it was his pack that traumatized Rin. Ouch ><. And then Kagome's mated, double ouch. Don't kick him to bad when he's down, I don't mind his character at all, he is kind of fun.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow ans interesting chapter, I guess you could be right about that, his love and sense of protect for Rin would overrule his anger.
I was surprised by the way the father and daughter reacted to Kagome's time. I love the interaction with Sesshy and Miroku PRICELESS
NOW TO THE SANGO AND MIROKU moments at the end, UNBELIEVEABLE, EXCELLENTLY DONE, I AM AMAZED AND SHOCKED BUT AM SO LOVING IT
I think you are right if you ignore someone long enough they will be more incline to let you have your way later if it mean you will at least pay them some attention
CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER AND RINS' FIRST LESSON NOW THAT SESSHY IS HEALTH AGAIN, ALL SHIT IS GOING TO HIT THE FAN
* SNICKERS AND GRINS BEHIND HANDS*
I was surprised by the way the father and daughter reacted to Kagome's time. I love the interaction with Sesshy and Miroku PRICELESS
NOW TO THE SANGO AND MIROKU moments at the end, UNBELIEVEABLE, EXCELLENTLY DONE, I AM AMAZED AND SHOCKED BUT AM SO LOVING IT
I think you are right if you ignore someone long enough they will be more incline to let you have your way later if it mean you will at least pay them some attention
CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER AND RINS' FIRST LESSON NOW THAT SESSHY IS HEALTH AGAIN, ALL SHIT IS GOING TO HIT THE FAN
* SNICKERS AND GRINS BEHIND HANDS*
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another brilliant chapter, if I do say so myself
you had be on edge with the scene with miroku and sango, very apt portrayal of the monk if I do say so, just can't wait to see if anything more does come of his innocent routine
I can't wait for more with sessy, even from his "deathbed" he's still able to scare the daylights outta most guys
keep up the great work! and update more ^.^
my only other request is.... koga! I'm dieing to see their confrontation
anyways, update! soon!
and for everyone else remember to vote for this story for best crossover at
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/iyfanguild/surveys?id=1293338
*hopes posting links is ok*
you had be on edge with the scene with miroku and sango, very apt portrayal of the monk if I do say so, just can't wait to see if anything more does come of his innocent routine
I can't wait for more with sessy, even from his "deathbed" he's still able to scare the daylights outta most guys
keep up the great work! and update more ^.^
my only other request is.... koga! I'm dieing to see their confrontation
anyways, update! soon!
and for everyone else remember to vote for this story for best crossover at
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/iyfanguild/surveys?id=1293338
*hopes posting links is ok*
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say I have been following this story all along and while I'm not familiar witht eh cross over element of the story I am still able to follow it and an thouroughly taken in by your story so far. I think you are portraying Sessh brilliantly and I love the fact that you are giving Rin power of her own. I also thought I should mention that I am so looking forward to Inu getting his alone time with his mate.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
New Chapter! Man, that history book will keep Belgarath busy if he can get his hands on it again. I loved how Miroku is actually getting closer to Sango, and all because he quit groping her. He's probably wishing he had tried this sooner. Man, I don't know if my brain would be awake enough for me to be typing a story this good at 4 in the morning. I love this story and can't wait to see where you take it. Keep up the great work.