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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I regret that it has taken me so long to review but i have had some thins going on in my life that were not
forseen so I am dealing with that. I am still however captivated by this story and the
amazing way you seem to write so that there is really no question as to what you mean or what the people
are thinging and feeling.
ONCE AGAIN I MUST SAY I AM SO ENJOYING READING THS STORY AND CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
forseen so I am dealing with that. I am still however captivated by this story and the
amazing way you seem to write so that there is really no question as to what you mean or what the people
are thinging and feeling.
ONCE AGAIN I MUST SAY I AM SO ENJOYING READING THS STORY AND CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was kinda lost reading the fifth book but my sister is all obsessed with it so she pretty much explained the whole series to me. She's also the one that told me about this story.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story keep it coming!!
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a nice chapter lol and i love how shippo ruins everything! hmm poor guy should just stay in behind an leave them alone when they arnt there .. lol anyway i love how long this story is gona be ! keep up the good writing!
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
#12,300 [in hits] ..something about that number I like, anyway I'm just commenting a little..no need to reply.
Well I'm glad this chapter [#44] dealt with them discussing the nature of relationship as mates, hopefully it cleared some things up and will be applied to in the future.
..and I will be waiting for more Rin revelations and DEFINITELY more Inuyasha & Sesshoumaru interactions it's kinda been awhile.
Oh, and take your time writing while in school [funny I had the impression you had finished college the way you write like you have an English Major], there are other stories to pass the time even though we'll miss your frequent updates.
Well I'm glad this chapter [#44] dealt with them discussing the nature of relationship as mates, hopefully it cleared some things up and will be applied to in the future.
..and I will be waiting for more Rin revelations and DEFINITELY more Inuyasha & Sesshoumaru interactions it's kinda been awhile.
Oh, and take your time writing while in school [funny I had the impression you had finished college the way you write like you have an English Major], there are other stories to pass the time even though we'll miss your frequent updates.
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello. This story has been on my To Read list for awhile. I must confess I have not yet read the the Edding's series as of yet. I tried but I didn't understand it. Perhaps it was that I started with a book from the middle of the series, or not, either way I haven't read it. If you could be so kind as to give me a list of what order to read the series I might be able to get through them without too much trouble. On another note, I LOVE this story. You have done a wonderful job portraying the characters. I was wondering if Sango or Miroku would come earlier, but there they are. I was wondering since you brought the majority of the main characters to the world and group, I was wondering if you you would be introducing Kouga or Kikyou into the story. They all have a fight against Naraku. Wouldn't it be fitting to have them in the 'big fight', that is if you are planning to kill Naraku at the end. Another question, who is it exactly is it that is bring all of them to the 'World' - forgive me but I have forgotten the name of the world in which they are currently travelling. If you have answered any of these questions to others I'm sorry, I don't really read the authors notes if the end of the chapter is a cliff hanger or if there is another chapter after. At the end of my reviews I like to thank the authors for taking time out of their lives to write, edit, and post each and every chapter for the world to read and enjoy. Thank you for sharing your talent. Zincpaw
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a punishment! hmmm, that might deter kagome from putting shoes on him again and it might not...if i knew that was going to be my punishment i might put them on him to because. LOL! poor miroku he was certainly having a hard time wasn't he? very good chapter. good luck at college and with work! i feel for you, i'm already up myself at that time...(littleolmee hands over a big cup of coffee-"say hello to my little friend, this will help. COFFEE!COFFEE!COFFEE! i warn you though they say this stuff will stunt your growth...well that explains what happened to me.") take care of your self!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well let me start by saying that I did find InuYasha and Kagome's alone time satisfying, bot the lemon and the conversation they had. It makes perfect sense that Kagome would need to make some udjustments in her thinking as does InuYasha. It was very sweet the way that played out. The Sango and Miroku portions were very well done also. I especially like the scene in the tent. I am a little disappointed that the updates may take longer due to the start of you classes, but since you can't write fanfiction for a living I can understand and will be waiting patiently for your next update.
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Citrus chapter! Miroku almost went ape-shit on Shippo. Poor kid. Oh well, maybe now he wont go wandering around the forest. I loved Inuyasha's revenge, what a way to get her to promise she wont put shoes on him. Oh and don't worry about being a vampire, vampires ROCK! Just dont go sun-bathing anytime soon. Update Soon!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while since i have checked up on this story but i have to say it was good to read 4 chapters back to back. anyway your story is awsome as always the updates are great and that wonderful mind of yours is off the hook. so with that said keep up the good work and update again soon.