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This chapter was enjoyable to read, but I can guess it was difficult for you to write. Poor
Rinny-chan, she so submissive and sensitive. Sessy will have to work harder to make Rin
feel more comfortable. Did he went away because he sense Rin submissive behavior not
going away? Does he feel that his protectiveness duty to Rin is being threaten?? Will Sessy
and Inuyasha be fighting again over this matter? Update soon.

Man, I have missed so many chapters. Going to the hospital sucks to say the least. Anyways, I love what you have the characters doing. Gotta the love the angst, then all the good stuff afterwards. Specially when InuYasha found the cave. Then whats been going on with Rin, and her new found ability. Ok, I do have a question here, I know that Kogome is on the pill in this fic, but, when do they run out ???hehehe< insert cheesy grin here>I know, stupid question, but I just had to ask. Dont know something lessen I ask. Ok, another question, whens the next chapter?

great chapter i love how rin is useing her will to do sess moves its soooo cool hehe anyway i cant wait for next chapter... hurry!! lol ^,^

Hope you come out with the next chapter soon, this has become one of my favorite stories. Wonder how they're going to meet Kouga?

Fantastic chapter! So glad you can still find the time to write! This was quite the testing of new waters with both the training, and even more so with the emotional interaction. I'll leave my comments at that, it's just to well, nice, to dissect. I'd much rather just enjoy. Some things are just better that way.

DAMN GOOD
I couldn't have pictured it any better than you wrotit
WELL DONE on RIN'S first lesson
I wonder will he think of Rin's power as similiar to how his yukia *sp* works
OH AND THE PART ABOUT THE WHIP WAS PRICELESS TO SAY THE LEAST
UNTIL NEXT CHAPTER AND HANG ON WITH SCHOOL AND WORK
I KNOW HOW STRESSFUL THAT CAN BE
* sighs thinking of the old days*

I had to laugh at Sess reaction to Rin forming the whip instead of throwing the flame. I notice in this
chapter that Polgara said that once Rin masters the simple skills then she will be able to create things.
Does this mean that Rin will reform Sess lost arm in later chapters. Will she be able to age her self
to be a young women? Could one of the sorcessors (spelling) tanned the skins???!!Will we see more
of Sango and Miroku? Will the group meet up with anymore of Naraku's henchmens?? Great chapter
and update soon.

Hello. Many thanks for responding to my eariler review. That is only the second time someone has actually mentioned me in the review responses. Thank you again for the list, I'm sure I will be able to read them easily, seeing as I work part time in a library. I could never figure out what order they go in, so I gave up on trying to read them. On another note I'm glad that Kouga will be making an appearance. I do dearly love those triangles they form. heheh. Rin's lesson(s) are really interesting, and making the whip was kinda funny. Seehoumaru has a green one that burns woth poison. Rin has a blue one that burns with fire. Well I think that it is fire, I mean you did say it was fire around her hand but then again it cut through the rocks. This is going to keep me up all night. A hought just hit me. If the Purpose brought everyone here but they didn't really know what was going on, then who was it that introduced Naraku to the inner workings of the World? Curses that is going to keep me up all night too. I should go before I give myself a brain overload. Thanks for taking time to write each and every chapter, and for responding to my review. Please update soon. Zincpaw

I liked how Rin manipulated the fire into an energy whip. Is this some kind of sub-conscious inkling of deeper feelings for Sesshoumaru? I can't wait to see where else this story goes. Oh, and HAPPY BIRTHDAY from this lecherous monk.

*sobs* *crys*