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I Love your story!! I love the fact that you have such a good plot along with comedy and love scenes. I have no ability to write like that. Im no good with details. But thats besides the point. I feel bad for Inu having to put up with all of Kagomes thinking. And I'm looking foward for when Koga comes along. Oh and Kudos for the whip stuff!!!!

First of all, Happy Belated 'yes-it-is-over-12-days-for-me-to-be-mentioning-this' Birthday!!!

Next, I'm glad we FINALLY got to Rin's lesson...can't wait to see how you utilize her blue energy whip as a weapon in the future and I do hope she gets over her submissiveness.

I must admit being gone a long time from reading this story, you have to rack your brains trying to figure out...remember...who the heck is who again, especially if you're not familiar with the story arc of the Edding's series.

Now when we get to the fight with Inuyasha & Kouga, which I KNOW will happen considering Kouga's hard-headedness, you gotta come with it. :-]

Lastly, I'm not sure if you've seen the 3rd Inuyasha movie, but it just occured to me WHY Sesshoumaru can't use Tetsuaiga/Tessaiga....the party line is because he is a Full demon or just a demon per se and with 'Yasha being half demon, he can. Well if that was the case, their father who IS a full demon would have NEVER been able to wield it at all to protect Inuyasha's mother. No, it's all has to do about are you willing to 'protect' the ones around you, in order for the sword to be used..and that is something Sesshoumaru has yet to learn or is willing to learn.

NOW, with all that said...with Sesshoumaru protective of Kagome...and him a 'little' acceptive of the Inu gang, maybe in the far future that could be an idea you could use. It's just an idea I thought about out of the blue. It's all up to you how you do your story.

Anyway, nuff said...and welcome back.

I'm still here!! I haven't had a chance to review in forever, and then with the hurricane, things have been really crazy. I love the whole thing with Poledra training Rin. She understands Rin and Sessy's relationship better than the other sorcerers, and is better equipped to handle the "Big Dog." Rin does need a little more backbone. Maybe if she hangs out a little more with Kagome, she won't be as shy. I keep forgetting the diferences in her and the other female characters. Even Sango, who was raised in the same culture is not as submissive, but she has the training and the status as a warrior behind her. Maybe if Rin pays more attention to how Poledra, C'Nedra, and Polgara act towards the men, she will be able to find an acceptable medium, allowing her to depend on herself and her power a little more instead of being so dependent (physically and emotionally) on Sessy.

I also like the way that Inuyasha and Kagome have both grown since they've become mates. Writing Kagome's musing may have been tough, but it came out beautifully, showing her growing understanding of what she is involved in as his mate. On the same note, Inuyasha, having almost killed her, is coming to terms with the fact that forgiving himself is as much an aspect of protecting her as any physical defense.

One more thing, (I know, this is probably the longest review in history!) the Miroku\Sango romance is coming along nicely. You've managed to build a believable scenerio without damaging either character's integrity. I LOVED the pig in Rakad. I didn't pull out my copies of the Mallorean yet, but I have to ask--was it Garion's pig from earlier? I wonder what happened to the old man! I like it when you throw in the little tidbits from the Edding's series. Do you plan on expanding on any of the people from that series? I adore Garion and Zaketh and would like to see some pov from either of them. Keep the chappies coming !!!

WOWWEEEEE!
you updated! I was starting to get paranoid I would never get another fix
another two awesome chapters, I am itching impatiently for more!
^.^

HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY TO YA!
And damn, I forgot about Pol having 'other" remidites ( did i spell that right?). Ah well. I do like pups tho. Im just a hapless romantic, so you have to forgive me. An am so glad for the update. keep it up, and thanx for the excellent writing.

Hey, just had a thought: What's Jaken doing while in the Vale? Even he gets bored sometimes. You should have a chapter or a part of one about what's going on in the Vale. It'd be interesting to see what you come up with.

I started reading this story because I love Inuyasha Kagome fics. Sometimes I would get a little lost, or it would seem the story was getting kind of slow. But I have throughly enjoyed this fic. Just wanted to know is Ses and Rin supposed to become mates or something like that? because well ew, she is little, just turned twelve, and he has raised her as almost as a daughter. Just wondered. Anyway the story has been great just thought I would let you know.

Yay! An update! I loved Miroku's admirer, lol a pig following a monk, that's rich. I also liked how Sango still denied anyhting happened even though the facts stated otherwise. poor Rin, I hope she cheers up soon and I enjoyed how Kagome FINALLY apologized for running off all those times and for getting the info on being a proper mate. Oh yea, I'm originally from Mississippi. Man, my little nowhere town of Gulfport is now one big lake. That's kinda depressing now that I think about it.....oh well, update soon!

Short chapter this time. That's ok it was great and very interesting. I felt
sorry for Miroku and Silk; having to where those disgusting garments and
going to that aweful place. That would give me nightmares? Great chapter
even though it was short, you must be beyond busy. Update really soon.

Wow, two chapters ( shouldn't you be the one getting the presents, it was your birthday after all)! Where to start, ah yes the 'Miroku and the Swine of Passion' interlude. I don't know where you come up with theses ideas but I pray they never stop. It adds so much more to what's going on to have something insane and random tossed in like that. The action was good on it's own but miss piggy added a twist that brought it to another level. It's like real life, you never know when random wierdness will strike. I think all the trouble you went through with Kagome, trying to figure out just what being mated and part of a pack, not to mention how they all fit in, paid off. Same goes with the talk Kag and Inu had. This is getting them to grow up, it had to happen sooner or latter. poor Rin there is a lot of stress on someone so young, even if she is a survivor. Good thing she will have the rest of her pack now to support her as well as Sess. Looking forward to how you are going to deal with Sango & Miroku after their little tryst. Don't think they are quite ready to commit just yet, which means more torment for the two. Anyway take care and happy studies!