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schedule December 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nice chapters so far. Thanks the story is progressing. Dry well. I like the fact that the gang is together now.  I like the fact that Miroku is in character.  

I have to say sometimes I do not recognise neither  Inuyasha nor Sesshoumaru. Sesshoumaru seems lose control too quickly, to have lost his senses. I cannot believe that he will let another person attack him from the back. I mean this is someone who could smell kagura  who was high in the air long before she even appears ( in the anime and manga). Also Sesshoumaru taking orders, suggestion from Inuyasha? really? That is not Sesshoumaru. Same with Inuyasha he is too alpha , not fazed by anything at all.  Inuyasha is not like that really..

apart form these point,  find the story refreshing. I have no clue who the of are as I have not read the book but I am enjoying them. So far i like Silk and hope he will stay good.  I wonder if Miroku and Sango love story will blossom as well there. I hope so.

 

 

schedule December 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nice story. IAM glad I. Have discovered it. So far I only have problem with so many new characters. I wish you had a list of who is who. Also, Inuyash  is so rude,  I find it distracting.  I wonder if he is rude like that in the manga or anime. Though I only have watch the sub version. I do find it off putting all the "asshole....." Inuyasha is not that rude. A part from those points. I really enjoy the adventure so far. Good job for having created a very interesting story.

schedule October 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I commented on Chapter 103 over on AO3 (love it!); I'm commenting here because I have noticed a small technical issue - Chapter 94 is posted twice as Chapter 94 and Chapter 95.  Chapter 96 is actually Chapter 95, Chapter 97 is actually Chapter 96, and so on, resulting in all chapters after 94 being displaced by one integer.

schedule December 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Chap 93: Very cool.  I love your characterization of Sesshomaru: stoic and measured without being distant.  Besides caring about Rin, he legitmately cares about InuYasha and Kagome, too, and he isn't unwilling to insert himself into their situation in blunt, straightforward manner in order to protect one or both of them from danger.

schedule November 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Chap 92, 17 Nov. 2016: Lovely sex scene.  Explicit without being overly vulgar or pornographic.  I really like how you wrote how InuYasha/s demon blood began to overcome him the moment he broke physical contact with Tessaiga/Tetsuseiga.  It gives me vibes from "Beauty and the Beast" whenever Kagome is with him.

person Animotions_of_love
schedule September 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am so very happy to discover you are still writting this story. I started reading it last month and instantly fell in love. It is so beautifully written. The emotions are so raw and real. The characters, settings, struggles and feelings are all described so perfectly that it just seems real. Your story is just so captivating, it draws you in. I did not realize it was an active story. I was completely heart broken when I finished reading chapter 89 and thought it was left there unfinished. I cant even convey to you the joy I felt when I noticed today that there was an 90th chapter. I am so excited to see how things devolope as the story goes on. I have read a lot of fan fiction, but none as dynamic and enchanting as this one. You are truly talented. Thank you for this story.

schedule June 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
YES. I'm so glad that the spell on Rin is broken and that she is reunited with Sesshomaru.
person Pysiak
schedule May 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I hope to someday read more chapters that you post! I pop on here to check in and make sure that you haven't posted more every few months or so. This story is what introduced me to David Edding's stories and when I began to read my way through the Belgariad it was like meeting a group of old friends - the same with the Mallorean. As you can see, your story had quite the impact on me. I truly hope to read more from you. As you once put it, this is a way to keep dear friends with you a bit longer and now I feel as though we have those friends in common.
person Merely Truth
schedule March 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Go ! I dream to know where all this is going and if Sesshomaru will win his Rin again. Thank you for your good writing ! A french mother, Merely Truth
schedule March 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on 11 years of journeying to the City of Endless Night! At 83 chapters with maybe 4-5 thousand words per chapter, this is one of the longest AFF fics I've ever seen, and first published in 2005, one of the longest running. Sticking with the story for so long illustrates your drive to write. Here's hoping for a happy ending to your Journey!