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My dear you have been missed. I was drowning and then i read this most wonderful life line.
Sorry couldn't help myself. I've been writing my own story all day and this just made my relazation time so much better. I loved the pig scene. That poor monk. I hope he gets back at silk somehow. And where are my fav, dog brothers. out getting into more mudfights? Anyway, thanks for updating, and i'm glad you did well in school.

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*My hands are clapping* . Thank you for sticking to the integrity of your writing. UUUGGGHH. I don't see how a Inu/Kag/Sess triangle could ever develop. (Sess &Kag have no relationship with each other; he's just indifferent to her like to everyone else. Rin seems to be his only exception). This is SO evident in the anime and the movies...

But to each his own. I am just glad that you don't intend to ruin THIS great plot with that horror !!

I am glad that you are bent on making Rin a little more emotionally independent from Sess (I remember commenting about her being away from his "emotional sphere", she needs that to mature psychologically).

She should love him of her own free will rather than love him because he saved her life. (Hey, here is an idea... in order to level the playing field, why can't Rin save his life one of these days ?).

From what I gathered that you've written about Sess, I don't think he's the type who hankers after that kind of crippling, dependent relationship with her.

I am a little disappointed that this particular story will not see Sess/Rin any more than just at the "petting" stage. Right now, it seems so paternalistic, don't you think !!!!????!! (Hhhmmmnn, although, I must admit that sleeping in the same bed like what they are doing kind of mutually excluded this being a familial one).

The emotional love that binds these two together is so evident, but to translate that to a more physical love, is that difficult to imagine ?
Of course, she would have to be a little bit older, otherwise that would ALSO be sick, heh ?..:-).

Your writing style/grammatics is top-notched. Keep it up.

good luck on your capstone work. I know how those semesters do, I have another one coming up. 1. for Associates Degree another for Bachelor's Degree.

awesome awesome story I jus read found this story and read the first chapter up to here! Its really really good! i love the Lil pack Inu, Sess, Kagome and rin all have together! its jus sooo cutee.. and Kagome Sess and INu all get along gr8 u should have Kagome become both their mates.. i mean their brother's they can share.. hehe Kag/Sess/Inu is my favorite pairing.. then Rin can be one of their pups along with Shippo.. Besides Kagome seems to feel just as protected around Sess as she does with Inu and she did say that one line "U'll make one girl very happy someday" I mean come on who Wouldn't want the 2 of em as mates? u could put an interesting twist in the story like In order for Kagome to survive a certain experience she needed more power and Sess was the one with her so they mate also cuz they have feelings toward eachother.. and kagome's miko powers could give Sess his arm back. thatd be awesome and it'd be cooler if when/if he got his arm back Rins amulet magically changed with him having his arm as well! anyways plzzz keep up the excellent work and plz update soon! I can't wait!

Hi. I can't stop laughing. I can see them now, "What have you been up to? You're covered in mud. Go take a bath right this instant!" The great dog brothers in a mud fight. I guess they couldn't wait for the snow. I should have stopped laughing by now. I review next time when I'm in a saner state of mind, aka more sleep. Walking off still laughing. Zincpaw.

I absolutely loved this chapter. I think that was missing both brothers lives.
But, its funny it had to take something that drastic to get Sess to talk. Is Sess
worry for Rin now that she can be a potential target or can he be intimidated by
her power? Please update soon. Sorry for the late responds I was busy with school.

at last i finally get to read again! great chapters, just read the chapter with the mud fight and had to stop to review to that one. my ghosh that was the funniest thing i've read in awhile! love how inu got sessh to fight with him in the mud! inu caring so much about rin was very sweet. just wondering why sessh wouldn't realize that inu see rin as someone he is trying to protect, he already has several times. does sessh just not realize it is his instincts that makes him want to help? well off to read somemore!

The mud fight priceless. Great story can't wait for thenext chapter.

Yay! You updated! Great chapter. At first I thought the Grolims had messed with Sesshy's mind the way he attacked Inuyasha. I loved the way you played this chapter out, they really had some pent-up aggression to let out. I especially loved the mudfight, that was sheer genius. *claps loudly* I especially loved what Sesshy said last, "Inuyasha, shut up." Good going! Update soon!

Gommen I have been so busy but I was able to read your last chapter and again FLAWLESS
I love THIS chapter even more and the mud fight was just to sweet* smirks* to compare
I think this is your best inu- sesshy chapter yet
Don't get me wrong the chapter with him cmforting inuyasha was so emotional but this one
showed inuyasha giving comfort and shows the depth of sesshy's trust in yasha to first
continue to fight then give in and confide in him and show that he trusts him with not just his life but his emotions
OK OK ENOUGH ALREADY AS ALWAYS LOVE IT AND CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT INSALLMENT
KEEP UP THE WORK YOU ARE TRULY GIFTED