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person New Fan
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that Jaken was dead??!! Just joking. I am glad he was not totally forgotten.
So my girl Rin will save Sesshoumaru??!!! I can not wait to read that when you release it.
I hope that she does not have to lose her life to save him. Knowing Rin she will be
honor and won't hesitate to die for her lord. Update this great story really soon.
person SP777
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...Chapter 50 should be dubbed 'The Night Insanity Reigned Supreme between a Hanyou, the Pompous Ass and Drama Queen', of course to call Sesshoumaru a pompous ass is an uncalled-for-insult. :=] Even though the boys didn't tell Kagome the WHOLE story [it was cute, by the way, the way you wrote it] I was glad they got some of that frustration out in the open and that Kagome was able to put a little light on the situation about Rin.

Above all, I like a little comedy to lighten a story, one can only be so deep so long...

50 chapters??? I'm glad for once in my life I'm able to enjoy the ride at the beginning of a story instead of coming in at #25 or #38, it's disappointing being left out from an Epic story [YES, epic] and everyone's ahead of you in the game. :-(

But I must say, you def'nah'lee have a gift for writing, I would have stopped at #30.

Oh, and how FAR are we from the City again??? :-)

nuff' said...
person SoutasSister
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just caught up with the story and I'm eagerly awaiting more chapters! You are doing a great job and I can't wait for more!
person New Fan
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just want to tell you that I enjoyed this chapter so much that I almost choked. I was laughing
so hard (I am getting over a very bad chest cold) that I had a hard time breathing. I just love it.
I love how Sess got Rin into the fun as well as showing a side of him I know she did not think exist.
I know Kagome as well as Inuyasha enjoyed it as well. I hope that you update really soon.
person Bookreader9999
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it's a great series. Even though I'm not familiar with the Eddings' stories, I'm very tempted to read them and see what I'm missing!!!

Oh, if you have an update list, I'd like to be on it. I can't wait for your next update!!!

person vbollman(nsi)
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I always thought Kags could take on Lord Fluffy. this in my eyes just proved it. I loved the mud fight again. Much better this time around with the girls are involved. just makes it seem that they really are a pack. And if these four are a pack. what happens with the others in the group. And just what is Jaken doing. Not hearing from him, and with him in the vale with the twins makes for a scary combo.

It was great hearing from you again. Keep up the great work.
person chanda
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 50 was excellent, to see them all in a mud fight was truly amusing, I would think that their little play episode, would strengthen the bond, they have slowly built up throughout the chapters. Congratulations, I could see why you were nominated, wonderful story, I have truly enjoyed it immensely.

I look forward towards your next update until then,
Chanda
person KJ
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*down on hands and knees begging*
pleaaase please please update!
the withdrawl is something fierce
on a more serious note, please put in more sessy inu bonding that doesn't involve knock down drag out brawling. I have to admit I would love to see Jakin for some comic relief, and koga for the fight it would cause with inu *hint**hint*

And as a bit of a kudos to you, and shameless promoting... I want you to win! ;)
person SP777
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back!!!

Even though I don't know WHEN you came, seeing I had to find your story through 'different channels'....and may I ask WHEN did the site change???

Anyway I must say...Sango has to be the NOSIEST b%$# ever!!! My God! Do the words 'I don't want to talk about it' EVER register??? Concern is one thing, but damn..!!! Oh, and just to comment, I think the words 'dog-boy' became a wee bit excessive if you read that passage in the chapter.

ANYWAY, you should know I am especially waiting to see the folks reaction when they see 2 VERY muddy Inuyoukais coming out of the storm. :-]

nuff said...for now.
person New Fan
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh goodie you updated. This chapter was a relaxing chapter. No drama or excitment.
That's ok because you must have the calm before the storm. Great chapter overall. Update soon.