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Well I just wanted to wish you luck and will be patiently awaiting the chapters.

this is greatkeepon wrighting

wow two more chp. im in heaven. i dont thnk i eva review before , but letting you know thatim happy so far. where sholud i go to do the voting?

The chapter with the pillow fight was cute. It's nice to see Sesshomaru "relax" when he's with Rin.

I just love it. I was suprise that you updated so sooon. You made my week.
I absolutely love this chapter. Rin is getting stronger everytime you write about
her. I can not wait what her "ultimate power" will be. Can she grow in size as well.
Will Rin have the will to choice what animal she can transform? When will Kouga show
his face in this story? Can her power go beyond, like create things? Update this great story soon.

Ah that was a cute chapter. Great update, absolutely loved it.


Until next chapter,
Chanda

I'm beginig to think you have a thing for toying with Sesshomaru! (not that it's a bad thing) Much more of Rin showing off her powers and the poor thing will be totaly lost. Good thing you've laid the ground work so well getting him to ease up a bit already, it lets this last playful interaction, and Rin's growing confidience work well. Nice to see another side of the demon lord be let out to play. Mind you I'm guessing you have a major reality check in the works for him, judging by that bit of prophecy quoted last chapter. Play time may be over far to soon, so as they say, let us enjoy it while it lasts.

FINALLY!!! I get to read a new chapter of 'Journey' [not the Pop/Rock group] on the DAY it was posted...
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You know what, I almost keep forgetting about Jaken [not like he was really missed] but it was good to know what became of him. It kinda makes me wonder if you have 'plans' for him soon. *wink* ;-) *wink*..*wink*..*wink*..sorry something got in my eye [..ignore that silly attempt at a joke couldn't resist..]

ANYway, as I was reading this latest passage #51[?] I couldn't help notice how as time goes by, this DOES read like a fantasy novel. If you EVER decide to write professional I think you could pull it off, with the determination, imagination and of course, drive...and I'll be one of the people to definitely check it out. :-)

nuff' said...

Wow, can't believe how much I missed. I didn't think anyone could pull off Sess being worried and even a bit not in control. That fight with Inuyasha was brilliant. It let him work off the feellings and stress without being weirdly out of character. The next chapter with Kagome working through some of her concerns, and seeing things in a different light was a great display of how her character is growing. Love the running teasing with Miroku and the pig, that is so something I can see the characters doing. Oh and the second mud fight was a great pack bonding moment, and it just goes to show how they are becoming closer. If not, Sess would have attempted to slice and dice them for even THINKING of doing that to his person. Looks like you are managing to teach an old dog new tricks. Nice touch with the revealing of the next bit of the prophesy, make for a nice change in tempo. I know this is short given the chapters since I reviewed last, but hey, we all know you do good work and there's not much I can say beyond that. Well except i can hardly wait to see what you have planned for Sess and Rin to fight through. Take care, hope to see the next update soon!

My Dear, thank you for another wonderfull chapter. I just wish I could read your mind to figure out what the hell your planning for our lovable demon lord. but then if I could read your mind I wouldn't have so much fun reading your story. I just love the relationship you have going between the monk and the thief. And now that Velvet has joined the party I can't wait to see the fun start. In my opionon(spelling ?) she will make a perfect female compainon for Sango. And could probably teach her a thing or two about hand to hand fighting. Take care and half fun. don't strain your self to much with your writing and school work. I would hate to lose your wonderful chapters (lol)

Luvs ya