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So sweet!! I love this chapter.

Hot diggity darn!!! It was high time to see the new chapter AND it was doubly wonderful since it especially centered around S/R. I miss them. It's fairly far and few in between in this fanfic with S/R focus. But when you do write about them, they progress along and are developing their characters quite well.

I see that you've given us a glimpse of another facet of Sess here. He was interested in not only protecting her from physical harm. Now, his feelings seemed to be evolving into something more textured, something deeper than mere protection. Thought, deed and voice culminating into action. (I don't think he's ever admitted aloud before that he considers her his possession).

Very delicately phrased, so vividly written and beautifully subtle. I could see those images of him hovering over that poor fella chatting up to the girl and scaring the boy to death. Classic jealousy (Psychology 101...LOL) !!!!

Great chapter as always. I just have some questions. One the mind travel that Rin undergo, when the characteristic was presented to
Rin, did Sesshoumaru know what Rin was thinking? Was Poldara described to Sess what Rin was thinking? The raven that was calling Rin's
name, what significants do it has with Rin? Is Rin's animiality is a bird or is it one of the four legged kind? If it turns out the Rin's
animality is a dog, boy would it piss Inuyasha off. Last, poor Rin if she only knew what her role is to Sess when she gets older, but for
now she just is ward-future lady of the Western Lands. Update soon

i wrote a nice review, and then when i submitted, it couldn't connect! Blast technology!!!

anywho, hopefully i can remember all i wrote.

i love the developing relationship between sesshy and rin. he has become much more affectionate with her,
and i love it. Whether he realizes it or not, he has already chosen her as his mate. i think finding out that she will
live a long life like him helped alot.
i know she is only 12 and has led a rather sheltered life, and i know that kagome talked to her a little, but i think that maybe
kags should have the birds and bees chat with her. i can't remember if she did or not in a previous chpt, but i remember how i was when i was 12..
crushes on boys, on pro hockey players lol.. seriously though.. raging hormones..

but, it's your story, and a wonderful one at that!!!

thank you so much for writing this crossover... it is the first one i've read that i absolutely love!!
the characters work so well together...

good luck with your last semester, i know how hard it can be... been there, done that...
anyways.. thankyou so much
i anxiously await the next chapter!!

oh, an if this fic was 1000 chapters, i would read them all!!!

same post twice.... I HATE TECHNOLOGY!!!!!!! stupid laptop ARGH!!!!
better now.. sorry bout that lol

I know that real life comes first but *ahem* I can't wait until you update again. I can't wait to see how Garion and Inuyasha talk about their mutual 'friend'. BTW, I am a huge Eddings fan and I love how you are marriaging the two cultures together. I really don't think you could've done this with the Elenium series. Couldn't you just see Sparhaek and Sesshomaru getting along?

Yay!!! A Sesshomaru/Rin chapter!!! It's nice to see the interaction between the two of them. I can't wait to see if Rin asks him what he meant by 'mine', or if he'll even try (or be able to) explain it.

Can't wait for the next update!!!

Its a creative story (really diverse). Rin and Sessy seem to have a weird sexual tension to their relationship, which is strange cause she's 12. Maybe I'm reading to much into it ~shrugs~, good work:)

continue with the storie i want gto see rin ask shessomaru why he said mine to her.

**** meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

love it. i love sesshomaru in this story! i wish rin was older somehow though! i understand not wanting to do the whole soap opera thing that they do with kids though. i just wish there was someway to make her older, even like 16 or 17. maybe she was put under some kind of spell to keep her young or something. anyways... i am definately getting the first book of the belgarian series. i really like the characters, especially silk. so i'm gonna check those out. i think you are doing an awesome job keeping them in character and i love that fact that inu and sesshy have formed a pack. i think it's really cool how you made rin a sorcress and how she will have a long life with our sesshy *wink wink* anyhow. i love it, and i have finaly read all the chapres you have up so i am finally caught up, although it about a week lol.

anyways, i love it and i look forward to more!!!

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