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hey.... i like this story and u are doing such a great job..keep up the good work...

ps when are u going to add another chapter

... grumnbles... dumb AFF... having downtime while I was in the middle of a review... Should have turned the option off if they were going to have downtime. Sighs... Well I have to type it again.. Sighs.. Okay Literary Goddess here we go again. reviews for chapters 16 - 18. And Starting up.. Chapter 16 - Another great chapter from Literary Goddess. I liked that they are reunited. Though I am stunned that Miroku didn't recognized Inuyasha without him showing his ears. I loved the comment Inuyasha thought to himself about Kagome. I loved that Kagome squealed. Squealing is a good thing!! Though for sensitive Inu ears it must have blasted them so. (ponders will Inuyasha like Kagome squealing in other things...?) I am a little anxious about Sango and Miroku back with the group. Will all the great and mature influence that Polgara provided for Kagome be erased? She managed to help both Kagome and Inuyasha in such a wonderful and miraclous way. I love Sango, don't get me wrong. She is a great fighter, a wonderful friend, and an awesome sister for Kagome but when it comes to opposite sex relationships.. she isn't that helpful. Polgara was just the right woman Kagome needed to speak with to listen to. Please don't let the influence be erased. I'm worried. If Sango shows more influence on Kagome... Kagome won't grow.. she might invert. And I'll let you know.. There is a few characters of Inuyasha that I don't like/approve of their behaviours/characteristics Miroku is one of them. I find he is a good friend, a reliable fighter/help but he is very much selfish and self serving even when in a group. So I wish to commend you on the accuracy you have achieved with keeping Miroku very true to form!! KUDOS!! Right on!! The lines.. "His brother whispered in his ear, “Does he not know that she is mated?” and “No and even if he did I doubt that'd stop him.” " Is completely and sadly true of Miroku... He is one of the biggest man-whores I have ever seen. (Sorry about the comment) Some more questions... this story is it set before or after Miroku had proposed to marry Sango? Or is it like a an offshoot from the manga series? Sango must be really hurt everytime that he does this... shows just how little he thinks of her. OOOOOOooooo!! I love.. LOVE the little added description you include. It just enhances and enriches the story that much more.. like when Inuyasha rubbed his leg with his foot!! Great touch!! Right ON!!! This is such an awesome story!! The way you have captivated and moulded the characters while keeping them so true to the orginals is Amazing!! Another question.. How did the bike basket travel with them and not her bike? ANd the other one I don't like that much is Shippou. Sighs.. he is already manipulating Kagome and turning her against Inuyasha. This demon went up against the Thunder Brothers and they were incredibly more brutal in their treatment of Shippou where as Inuyasha is pulling or subduing his strength when he goes at Shippou. Sorry.. I see Shippou as a child Bully to Inuyasha and very manipulative. He knows how to push Inuyasha beyond his restrainst and does so either through deed or word. sighs... with the appearance of the rest of the Inu-tachi/gumi the forward developments and growth in Kagome's and Inuyasha's relationship will most likely stall and go backwards. Their friends may mean well but they interefer in a negative way with Inuyasha and Kagome causing sometimes more damage than good. The progress gained from just being Inuyasha, Kagome, Sesshoumaru and Rin.. I hope with crossed fingers isn't completely washed down the drain. Loved the interaction with everyone!! and the seperate talks made!! Totally awesome!! Liked how mature Miroku was when he answered Sesshoumaru's question. Bad move for Inuyasha. Sending Miroku out of the room... The Girls!! Poor Inuyasha. Now that Miroku knows... he will mostly likely tease and torment Inuyasha ruthlessly about his mating with Kagome... and End results will be a negative effect upon their relationship. I can see it happening all that progress... Inuyasha will retreat back into his shell. I wonder what will happen next. I loved the Cliffie ending for the chapter!! Chapter 17 - Another question.. I wonder if Polgara or Belgarath could help Kagome develope or help her powers to grow? Sango seemed shocked that Kagome and Inuyasha are traveling with people of High heirarchy, is it that she doesn't believe they are able to do this? Again awesome and wonderfully masterful touches with descriptions!! Makes the story so full bodied and rounded!! Literary Goddess, you have it and you know how to use it!! WHOOT!!! Whoot!! WHOOT!! And there is one of the reasons why I find Sango's influence about Kagome and Inuyasha relationship is good. She believes in the worst in him. I like Kagome's response to Sango's question about Kikyou. I wonder if she will show up... Hrmm... Well most likely. Just don't know when.. Plays thriller mood music from The Shadow.. And in response to Sango's remark... I wonder if Miroku will actually wake up.. when someone does attempt to kill him when he pulls that stunt at the wrong time... And the interaction between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru.. that was funny!! They are both so stubborn except Inuyasha shows visibly how stubborn he is whereas Sesshoumaru doesn't!! LOL!! They are just sooo much alike!! It's too cute!! wow. That seems to be a touchy subject with Sesshoumaru about Rin. I'm glad that Inuyasha now knows the truth!! I wonder what will happen when two and two are put together and it is learned it was Kouga who did this. Slaughtering people just to eat. Dispicable. sighs... more than likely... Kagome will make up excuses upon excuses for Kouga's behaviour and go empty-headed and forgive him with flowers and smiles. Will she acknowledge the cruel side of Kouga? After all she never stood up to him about killing people and when Inuyasha tried to. Interference. Loved how Inuyasha was amazed by Tenesaiiga!! So sweet. Oh my Gawd!! Literary Goddess you had me bursting with WAFF!!! Overdose!! I loved the piccie Rin drew of Ah-Un. Too cute!!! Great reflection you had Sesshoumaru show here also!! Great reflection here as well with Inuyasha thinking about his brother. "“I can respect the lady's privacy. I won't ask her any questions.” " argh!! Miroku is lying through his teeth. He'll hound her or Inuyasha. And he has never once ever Respected a Lady. Humph!! Oh dear.. That comment from Inuyasha regarding Kikyou.. didn't sound all assuring. Like he was still holding onto the possiblity of switching back over to Kikyou. chokes.. middle of religious war?... chokes.. It started when everyone popped into their world.... Will have to wait on Chapter 18... AFF is acting up again.

ive been waiting a while for an update (i review before i read weird right) any who thanks have something to do.

FINALLY I'm able to review! I couldn't last time from the switch over...

As always you da' best in epic fictions & one ultimate crossover with multiple characters to keep track of all around.

I was kinda hoping for more damage to Kouga but, oh well...it was still tight.
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Now what I REALLY want to mention, now I could have SWORN you mentioned in the past you didn't read yaoi, but it seems like you nominated an Inuyasha/Sesshomaru story in that genre [..even though it IS a good storyline with a twist in the plot and good characterization of the lead characters..]

*looks slyly* What gives? Fess up? :-)

By the way, did you check out that story I mentioned, I think it was 'Domestication'? It was such a sad, intense story, you couldn't turn away from it.


anyway I'm gone...nuff said.

You updated. Yiiippppeee!!! Poor Kouga... he is finally finding out that Kagome was never his. To bad for him. Now I
would like to see how important he will be to the group. Update really soon.

First I'm glad to see this story moving to whatever city & meeting new people I have NO clue knowing who they are..

Second, is anyone else having trouble getting #62 to download completely??? Is it the site again?

Another great chapter. I would like to know how Koga will fair with so many people wanting to hurt
him. Now he does not Kagome as his alllie anymore. Will Rin be the one to stop the murderous ideas
of Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru by learning to trust him. Will Rin be the one to get the group back together
because she will be the first to trust Koga? Can not wait until you update again.

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do ing the happy jigg. yeah antoher chappy. so glad. enjoyed the last one. im happy.

Yay!!! another amazing chapter. I really enjoyed sesshomaru lying in the tent with rin goirn over the events at the store.
i'm also very very anxious to find out who it is that is talking to inuyasha, and just what koga has to do with it.

i anxiously await the next chapter!!!!

Great update as always. I liked the battle scene, great detail.

Until your next update,
Chanda