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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked that chapter. Sorry it's been a while since my last review. This story is just amazing. You've done a fine job bringing it together.
Chanda
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm just re-reading and thought I'd drop a review in the middl of it... I've gotten a little more caught up than I expected; instead of one chapter a night as I'd planned, I'm reading 15-20 a night. Damn you and your excellent skills.
I just re-read chapter 48. The mud fight cracked me up. I love to see the brothers like that, it's inspiring and makes me happy. Sessh can be such a stick in the mud.
Anyway, I'm still loving it. Looking forward to more from you soon! Hope your holiday was good!
I just re-read chapter 48. The mud fight cracked me up. I love to see the brothers like that, it's inspiring and makes me happy. Sessh can be such a stick in the mud.
Anyway, I'm still loving it. Looking forward to more from you soon! Hope your holiday was good!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Meat, blood and pussy... the makings of a very happy Inuhanyou. Great chapter, wonderful writing as always and a lovely lemon. Yum. Good luck on the next chapter!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can see why it was so important to get Miroku to cooperate with you... He was very hevily featured. It was interesting to get his perspective on this. And Sango's reaction to him telling her to stay put was a bit of a surprise until I thought about it. She's so insecure in so many ways and her fears about his feelings for her are just the tip of the iceburg.
I really enjoyed the chapter and I hope you can write more soon. I'm thinking about starting again, reading a chapter a day for a while, to refresh. And I only re-read the best of the best, you know. ;-) Good luck!
I really enjoyed the chapter and I hope you can write more soon. I'm thinking about starting again, reading a chapter a day for a while, to refresh. And I only re-read the best of the best, you know. ;-) Good luck!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i was kinda disappointed with this chapter, i waited soooooooo... long for an update then, i dont know what i was expecting, but what do I know im not a writer, so i shouldnt be so mean. thank for the update though. cant wait for the next one. i know i think it was too short.. maybe thats it.. so like 5 more chap ready???? say yes.. PLEASE.. i dont want to wait long again....
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad...Hard to follow a bit because of the other characters. you are a good writer, but the story is a little confusing. do these new characters appear young or old? I'm only on chapter 6, but i'll read some more today...hopefully this gets a little easier to understand...also, you're Rin and Sesshoumaru are a little strange. i know he has softened towards humans because of her, but he's acting downright weird here...flowers in his hair? hmmm...well just my opinion anyway. I dunno, they kind of creep me out. i like the other characters though, even though i'm not sure who is who...too many new people show up in each chapter. sigh, maybe i'll just start over. hopefully that will clear things up.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE..... IM BEGGING.
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping you posted an update. I really miss this story. I know you're probably very busy, and I don't want to sound like I'm pressuring you. I do hope I see an update soon. Oh and Koga got what he desirved...LOL.
Chanda
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read all 63 chapters of this story and I am amazed...It's wonderful!! I have been spellbound and now am hooked! Please do update soon..I can't wait to know more!!
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heya FarAwayEyes! Yes, it's me. I's back. And I'm really sorry about not telling you before I left, but the reason I haven't been talking to you at all over the summer is that I was at camp, and I had to be there for all 3 sessions 'cause I'm a Counselor in Training. It was one of those overnight camps, with no computers or anything allowed, and by the time I was there for the summer I remembered that I forgot to tell you, and a bunch of other people I keep in contact with that I wouldn't be there. Also, if you ever tried talking to me you may have gotten an answer from my cousin, whom I said could borrow my comp. while I was gone. So, yeah. Sorry about everything, all of this. Promise to tell you next time I leave for a while. ^^
And the long awaited Koga POV chapter. I must say, you did a brilliant job of keeping Koga in character, seeing as he's just a minor character in the series. His reactions to everything were perfect, just as expected of him. And you didn't make him overly mean like I half expected you would, so I love you for that, too. And I see they're getting suspicious of the horrible religions as well. Heheh. We'll be seeing more of the wolf tribe later, I expect? Probably not for a while, though, but I dunno. It's your fic, I'm just reading it. ^^
Also, I haff some other news not pertaining to this fic. You know how I read the latest InuYasha chapters, right? Well, recently something amazing's been going on. There's a new character, you see. And guess what? It's Sesshomaru's mother! I nearly fainted in shock when I read that. She looks a lot like him, except more...girly, obviously. She's also more cold and unfeeling than he, meaner. I laughed evily when I saw that. Also, Sess and Rin are getting closer in the canon! He went into hell to save her, it was so sweet! And one part he thought she was dead for a second, you should've seen the look on his face! Of course, his mother was mad that he was getting so attached to humans, but I kept saying 'awww' of course.
Anyway, there's lots more stuff I wanted to talk to you about, but I'll wait for you to get on MSN so we can talk there. Until then, toodles!
And the long awaited Koga POV chapter. I must say, you did a brilliant job of keeping Koga in character, seeing as he's just a minor character in the series. His reactions to everything were perfect, just as expected of him. And you didn't make him overly mean like I half expected you would, so I love you for that, too. And I see they're getting suspicious of the horrible religions as well. Heheh. We'll be seeing more of the wolf tribe later, I expect? Probably not for a while, though, but I dunno. It's your fic, I'm just reading it. ^^
Also, I haff some other news not pertaining to this fic. You know how I read the latest InuYasha chapters, right? Well, recently something amazing's been going on. There's a new character, you see. And guess what? It's Sesshomaru's mother! I nearly fainted in shock when I read that. She looks a lot like him, except more...girly, obviously. She's also more cold and unfeeling than he, meaner. I laughed evily when I saw that. Also, Sess and Rin are getting closer in the canon! He went into hell to save her, it was so sweet! And one part he thought she was dead for a second, you should've seen the look on his face! Of course, his mother was mad that he was getting so attached to humans, but I kept saying 'awww' of course.
Anyway, there's lots more stuff I wanted to talk to you about, but I'll wait for you to get on MSN so we can talk there. Until then, toodles!