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for The Deadly Game

by la89801

person Anon
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want to read the damn sequel!
person Lady of the Light
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEE IT. OMFG. UPDATE PLEASE. I'LL PERFORM WILD SEXUAL FAVOURS, I'LL BRIBE YOU. ANYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT SO MUCH
PLEZZ MAKE A SEQUEL
I WHOLD BE SOOOO HAPPY IF YOU DID
only one thing wholdnt sesshomaru
be able to tell if she was telling a lie
owel i still LOVED it
^^
person SR
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sequal now!
person 85characters
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sequel,sequel,sequel,sequel!!!!!!!! and that's all i got ta say.
person Yumiko
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You definately MUST write a sequel
i just love this, its simply amazing, i would really love it if you were to write more so please do, please please please please please!!!!
ill be looking forward to it ^^
person rach
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how oculd u even say this is finished? theres no ending, ur talking about a sequal but u really havent FINSIHED this at all! what the hell! sorry to get mad and all, but i guess its a good sign, cause uve got me so hooked i need more!
person ldymoonluvsinuyasha (not logged in)
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh yeah, you have to write next chapter, you can't leave it like that! One thing I really like about this story is that it's more accurate if Kagome became Sesshomaru's mate. I've read other stories where Sesshomaru changes some what just for Kagome. I'm not saying that I don't like Sesshomaru and Kagome stories, it's just that, well, to me, their not a good match, well, they are and they aren't, but, I never saw Kagome being truly happy with him, so this story really fits my ideal of their relationship at least in the beginning. I would really like to know how this comes out so please write the next chapter.

ldymoon
person LadyAkina
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! She should head for the well! Don't go visit anyone else! Please UPDATE!

-Baby K