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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really sweet. It is rare that I read things like this that sound more like a romance novel than a hard core porno. This type of work is hard to find. :)
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved this story. Its been a while since i read a good fic like this one. I hope your planning on continuing it.
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Totally hot!!!
Way ta' go!!!
Way ta' go!!!
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful story. There were only a few problems I had with it. The auther made a few mistakes of his and her, you keeped puting a his when it was supposed to be her and her when it was supposed to be him, this confused me. Also you need to space things out more make the story into more paragraphs. Also this is a grammer error and writing error, each time a different character talks it has to be a new paragraph. But other then those few grammer errors the story was wonderful very creative and arousing i didnt want it to end.
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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well haven't read it yet but it sounds good
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story, very well written! Thank you for actually paying attention to grammar! ^_^ <3
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i like this story so far. its really good. =D this was my first inu kag lemon and it was good!
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story is was short but it was just as good ss your other stories keep up the good work
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Other than the small info technicalities, I really enjoyed it. Your writing flows well. I was wondering though if there were going to be more chapters?