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for Forgive me?

by flamingheartscry

person sesshysgirl08
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!! this was a great story.....awsome job!! i loved it!! this was really very good and i think you captured their emotions well! GREAT JOB!!!!
person sky
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story. IT was sad and really well written.
person Sentinel_of_Ganymede
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Did you write the song/poem? 'Cause if you did, it was awesome. If you didn't, that's cool to, but you need to tell that to the rest of us! But anyway, enough of the constructive criticism. I think that you have some real potential! Please write more!

Sentinel