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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very written and is a very good idea. The idea is dark but it works and it will be interesting to see where you go with with because there is a lot of things that need to be worked out. So hopefully you will continue with the story and soon so I can find out.
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok usually i dont review here but i want you to keep writing and this is the only way to try and spure you on. Its a good story dont live it unfinished. That would be mean.
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, good, excellent.
Long chapters, coherent, fluid text and dialogue, sh*tloads of emotion and feeling, the whole "paths diverge and reconverge" thing, and plot development, hoo yeah.
We may have a "Fugue" killer here.
~S!~
Long chapters, coherent, fluid text and dialogue, sh*tloads of emotion and feeling, the whole "paths diverge and reconverge" thing, and plot development, hoo yeah.
We may have a "Fugue" killer here.
~S!~
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I said it before, and I will say it again- beautiful story. I love that you made Koga still alive so that Kagome could find out what truely happened. It's still very sad and seems as though she won't ever have any good luck... Don't you hate it when that happens to ya?
Please update soon! I'm your #1 fan ^-^
Please update soon! I'm your #1 fan ^-^
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was soooo sad! I was just about in tears! You are evil for leaving us with a cliffy! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! oh ...pretty please, with sugar on top ;)
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very beautifully written story. Very sad as well- I was almost crying.
I give you a 10 out of 10! How will you make another chapter though? I'm interested in finding out...
Great job!
I give you a 10 out of 10! How will you make another chapter though? I'm interested in finding out...
Great job!