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for Mistakes

by fallenangel7583

person Alpine02
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this and all of your works... I am a complete fan... (Jumps up and down and then does happy dance)
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.....Wow...I would have never thought......just wow. You really did wonderful with this fic and I will be reading 'Curse of the dragon' soon. I don't know about everyone else, but I love how your escentually tore Inuyasha and Kagome (especially Kagome) apart and then rebuilt them. I cried through out most of the first chapter. I agree on how you portraid their reactions. I still have one question though, What happened to the Shikon no Tama? I understand that it is irrelevant to this story, but I'm still curious. Anyway this story was very well written, but I found many typos where a words such as 'it' and 'in' were switched. I figured out what you ment any way. Other than that this story was almost perfect. This story was more emotional than any other I have read. You should really label it as angst, becaus so much of it is heartbreaking. I really loved it though and the ending made my heart happy. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your works.
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing. you are so awesome in your wording and all of that. i love happy endings! i was all teary eyed! gah, you rule!!!!
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really don't know what to say. This story captivated me right from the beginning, like a good book that you just cannot put down until you get to the very last page. I spent all of my afternoon reading it(when I should have been keeping a few appointements that I GLADLY cancelled). I had tears in my eyes from start to finish. I hope that you have a few more of these tear-jerkers up your sleeve. I'm looking forward to reading them. Please keep them coming.
person MeGhAn
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heyy thanks for the review on my story THE LAST FIGHT your story was great your a good writer.
I like how you tied the song in with what was happening in the first chapter. Keep Writing stories ;P MeGhAn
person SultryRayn
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG... I love this ... I mean it is sad and I cried... Im really cried... I ended up having to stop to dry my eyes because I couldnt read the screen... and again you do not disapoint me... keep up the good work... yay!!! they are together again!!!anwyays... Ja Ne!!
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How have I not read this yet??? It had me enthralled from beginning to end. Absolutely breathtaking. It's actually the only songfic I've ever read and actually liked! (the fact that you used four of my favorite Linkin Park songs had NOTHING to do with it I'm sure) You should really repost this! Well, just put it out there again at least. People need to know how it's done! lol Great darkness, without really overdoing it. Lots and lots of pain...and believe me, I felt it! At first I was slightly disappointed at the end, but the more I thought about it, I liked it better that way. Still sad that he waited 500 years and she only waited 4. Anyway...Brava! and goodbye.

~butterflysuki
person chanda
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok smack me know...LOL Why in the hell havn't I reviewed this story before, I read it once and it made me cry, I was looking for it again, however, I was new to this site and I could'nt find it, now its up again and I had the privilage to read it again, and yes I cried the second time... I just love it, I am glad that no matter what she did he still loved her unconditionally... Beautiful story, and very well written.

Chanda