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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Will Sesshoumaru come along on the trip to help Inuyasha and his friends. I know
that Inuyasha does not need Sess help. But, there constant brickering will put some laughter into
thier travel. I hope that you will update really soon.
that Inuyasha does not need Sess help. But, there constant brickering will put some laughter into
thier travel. I hope that you will update really soon.
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh, i read this all night, i was tired as hell the next day, but it was worth it! i thought about it all day...but then again, i'm starting to think i may be a bit of a nerd...oh well, I'M HAPPY! this story makes me happy!
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a beautiful piece of work. You certainly write like you have been writing for years! I truly love your portrayal of the characters - they are written extremely in character, and this story is right up there with anything written by resmiranda, wheezambu, and sueric. Although your summary needs work - I almost bypassed this story entirely because the summary appeared to be too... generic. Which would have been an utter shame. I have only read the first five chapters so far, and usually don't review until I've read a fic in its entirety, but since I'm so darned impressed, I couldn't help but to jump out and leave this little note! Thank you for such a great, great read = fun, poignant, emotional with just the right touch of angst, and very well written!
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kim.....did I ever tell you how much I love ya ;) Any who, I loved this chapter. Unlike most writers, you are unpradictable, and I love it. Most importantly, your very original, and I havent seen a story with all these elements in it at once!! YAY FOR KIM!!! I also love how you rembered that they are in the past, and silly things like band-aid's and needles (and ramen for that fact, even though thats not your origional idea) that are every day things to us are sure to ohh and ahhh 'em back then. Well, keep it coming. btw....Im almost done with "THE KISS" scene!!
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again an excellent chapter! I'm in love with the Ji-chan/Kaede thing! Chicken pox? Harsh! I cannot express my love for this story in words, just know that I look forward to EVERY update. Poor Sess, he cares so much for Rin but has no idea how to show it. He's more defunct that Inu is! I love it! Can't wait for your next update. P.S. Can Sess and Inu take care of a few of my co-workers?? Hasta la next update! B.I.G.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!! I love it!!! I'll never get tired of reading this fanfic...the ability you have is very impresive use it well(just like you are doing now) Can't wait to read next chapter. Update as soon as you can please!!!!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello....from one, if not your bigest, FAN. TEHE...lol. You got to love me sometimes...:). Ok, let me started with this....I'M loveing the whole seshh/rin thing...alway been a fan of theres. Also, i know that sessh wasn't going to hurt kagome....so it had to be something to do with rin. Also don't worry about taking forever getting this chapter up...it was still worth every hour i spent checking here to see if it's up yet. ALSO THIS IS THE BIGGEST THING. i heard that THIS SITE NEEDS MONEY...if that is so i'm ask, begging, demends, all that have money to donate it. I did some money...but i'm a teenager and i have very little. Still i did what i had to to keep this place. Now, back to the story....waiting for another lemon, hope it comes soon. Also your hero's sessh and inu. saving you that was so cute. I hope that someone isn't that mean to you. If so then your fans will come and kick there asses, and we'll bring the HOTTIES along to. lol. Hope that you update soon. With love, your fan Vikki
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh, its here at last. good chapter. its gonna be cool to see how rin turns out. 1 week around the inu-gang ought to have quite a profound effect. i never would have thought that was the reason sesshomaru payed them a visit. seems he's slowly accepting them as family, and i'm anxious to see how his personality changes as the sequel is written. anyway, i loved the story at the end, great way to let off a little steam i bet.
NEWS FOR THE MASSES; the website is about 90% done. pretty much all it needs is a name, chapters 17 and 18 to be added, and i still need to build dianes image gallery. once thats done i'm going to upload it and we'll be ready to go.
NEWS FOR THE MASSES; the website is about 90% done. pretty much all it needs is a name, chapters 17 and 18 to be added, and i still need to build dianes image gallery. once thats done i'm going to upload it and we'll be ready to go.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well this was a good chapter. I don't have much to say I did like the 'insight' to Sessy you did a great job. I hope Miroku is ok after being bitten by that snake ting. Not much to say this is a great story. I am headed out the door will have to come back and read "The Brief, Yet Violent Tale of Revenge - In which Kimberlee’s Co-Worker Lu* Get’s What She Deserves." Sorry your move didn't go well. Update when you can.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is my first review on this site. This is my fav story, period. That was a great way to get shessmrou to smile, i always wondered what would get him to smile. This one of the few stories that actully have a plot. I cant wait to see what happens with Rin and her training. i also want to know what happens with "snake women". I have no qualms about this fic pleeeaaasssse continue.
P.S. im a guy who loves love stories.
P.S. im a guy who loves love stories.