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I love your story! I can't wait to see how Koga reacts to InuYasha and Kagome being mates. Plese update soon!

I had a thought for some names. The male one is Kikan, and the famel is Kagami. They both mean mirror. I thought it would be cute! Especially if the child happend to look like on of their parents!

Kim, Kim, Kim, where to begin? Lets just say I am so beat from a long day at work, but as soon as I saw chapter 20 up, I strained my eyes to stay open to read it! I love it. Im glad you make Sessy have a personality. I know he has one, but people tend to think he's only a snotty, selfsentered (hot) jerk, thats only good for a "cool" fight sceen in the manga or anime. Im glad you see the other side, only true fans and dreamers see in him. Im glad I met you to, although I convinced we already knew each other in that past life, what were we, oh yeah, Gods ;) Any who, another great chapter, I only wish my art could compare in the bueaty of your words. Im seroious, and Im full of myself when it comes to art, even though I know theres better out there! If we don't think highly of our selvs, we'll never get anywhere in life! Im happy you have a large following, and Im happy to be part of that goodness in your brain. REMEMBER...we WIll reach all the people you want to and touch there lives just as you did mine! Talk to ya soon, keep it up!

I will be loioking forward to the sequel. That was a great chapter. I thought that Kouga knew about
Inuyasha and Kagome. I guess the next chapter will be very interesting. Update soon.

Oh this is so good!!! you have to update soon. you cant leave us hangging like that.

Lemon just for me...i feel loved. ONCE MORE WE"RE BACK. i hope that you didn't go overboard trying to get this chapter up. Ok, where to start, i know, miroku about to hit a child that was great. Sad, but great...i love how inuyasha rushed right in there to stop him that was good. I would, personally, beat the shit out of him if he ever tried that to a kid. As for him being controled that made it all the better, we know that miroku would never hit a child. Now, on to the new evil here....i like it. Now rin, the way sango is teaching her fight and kagome is the educational stuff that was VERY SMART. That made my day...you're getting a glimpes into what they're going to be like as mothers. Ok, i'll leave you know...you have much to do. but remember THIS IS A GREAT STORY AND DON"T FORGET ABOUT US....with love your fan forever Vikki...:)

Ah Kim, I can't write what I tell you every day, but once again, the wait was worth it. Another great chapter, showing the bond of family and love, while still staying in character! Great Job, I am amazed once again!

YES this is kick ass stuey has been showing me the web site seeing what i think. Well i needed that now i can't what to read chapter 20 well see you then

yay!!! Nice update I loved how they "put their heads together" to figure out what to teach Rin. Poor Miroku being "controled" it was cute the way Inuyasha put it about seeing so many of them controled over the year that he could tell when it was going on. I liked the fight scene and how they worked together. I am glad they are all going to the mountian. Keep writing update soon.

wow, you included a TON of outside references for this one... ranma 1.2 (i need to watch that some time) the beauty and the beast thing, and rin wanting the yellow kimono.. man this is gonna be good. you'll be happy to know that i'm looking at your work in a different way now, looking at ways to improve my own writing. you're an inspiration to me in that aspect, and i hope that some day my work will be half as good as yours :P. one piece of criticism here though, and thats the lack of a definition for 'ohayo gosaimasu' i dont think that one has been mentioned before, so for those who dont know, it means good morining. if it has been, then well, forget i said that. keep it up.
REVIEWERS- check out the website (http://theotherside.125mb.com for those who missed it). like kim said there can and will be changes made to it. if you have any suggestions, let me and kim know. also, this site is the biggest undertakeing i've ever done, so there are likley still errors (spelling and otherwise) on it despite my best efforts. if you catch anything, dont hesitate to email me.

I was beginning to worry about the plot, but this chapter was awsome. I really like the twist and the drama of Miroku being under the control of one of the snake youkai. I really liked the show of power also. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next!! So please update soon!