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hey, sorry for my absence review wise, but i have been keeping up with the story. the thing with kouga took quite a different direction than i expected, i was looking forward to more of a comedic kind of thing, but it stayed rather serious. on that note, i want to say congrats, the characters personalities are begining to change as they mature, and thats making them more your own, i love it. anyway i want to appologize to everyone who tryed to view ch 21 on the beautiful souls website, it was my fault that it wasnt on the chapter menu. ill make sure that doesnt happen again.

Yes the fight seen with InuYasha and Kouga is grate and now the plot really starts to get really good. i really hope you wright a chapter about Kagome and Sango haveing kids and how are the names comeing along

Sweet maybe another lemon i'm happy to hear that. ANd it was just for me...I feel so loved. Ok, on to the story. It fouces on emotions that is a good one. I haven't seen a story yet that had that happen i like it. TEHE. As for inuyasha's past and turning it into a one shot i'm not to sure on that. It's going to be sad and heartbraking yet i want to know everything about it....SO YEAH GO FOR IT. I love reading you work it's the best. As for the Kouga one shot i can't wait to read that...poor guy to bad...KAGOME IS INUYASHA'S GIRL. :) i love saying that. Also, the miroku acting all...wise in this one i liked that a lot to. I made me see a new side to him more so then i had before. When i read about the snake and shippo my heart jumped...and i screamed out NOOO. My boyfriend was talking to me on the phone when that happened he thought i was lossing my mind, yet again. It was funny. While until next time...still loveing this...your fan vikki

Kim, WOW. Its everything and more that I hoped for. All these emotions and ideas came rushing into my head! Even for our origional story! Fight and action scenes like these. I felt power just from reading! I think its the same energy Kagome felt ;). Thank you so very much for comeing into my life with this great talent! I dont know what else to say, so many emotions swarming inside of me! Please, please keep up the good work! Much Love from your past life sis, Diane! ;)

I enjoyed chapter 21 very much. I wonder if that snake woman ( queen I guess) know what is going
on with her snakes as well as what the gang is doing? Is she keeping a close eye on them? Update soon

Well I must say that this was a wonderful to read. I turely enjoyed it all. You ar esuch a creative writer. I give u 2 thumbs up. Now I hope to see more. I need to see what the out come for all are going to be. Hope to see the next chapter really soon. Keep the excellent work up.

YES me want MORE now i can't what to see just what InuYasha will do to Kouga >:)

I love this latest chapter! And I never expected that ending, I had forgotten all about Koga! I hope that you update soon!

I'm really enjoying your story. I look forward to more of you interesting, full, rich chapters!!
Thanks for sharing your version of the IY world.

Sorry this one is a little late. Never worry one will come they always do. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME...you ended it like that. I'm dying to now what is going to happen. I hate Kouga is always gets in the way. While i don't hate him to much but now i'm hating him..LOL. With the whole rin thing that was great i loved the whole thing...fighting, reading, math, inuyasha's stories, and all the other things gods i love them. Now for Inuyasha's past...that was...GREAT. That was great and i so forced when i was reading that part...not like i'm not forced all the other time i am. He was so open with Kagome and that was so sweet and cute. He's past was so hurtful i started to cry. I was on the phone with my boyfriend when i was reading and started crying he asled what happen to make me cry and i said "inuysha was sent into a camp and was treaded like shit"....he was laughing at me and said "for you to cry this much that has to be a VERY GOOD, VERY WELL WRITEN story." i agree with him completely. As for the lemon...thank you...i really wanted to read one. Yet what was that pink glow? OK i'll let you go so you can write the next chapter....FORVER YOUR FAN...vikki