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for Beautiful Souls

by BrethlessM

person Kumiko
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay a cookie!!!*eats cookie* Yummy!!^^Thanks for updating! The chappy was gr8t!!!!!!!I can't wait for the next one!!!
person Inuzands
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to drop a quick note to tell you how much I have enjoyed this story! I'm always thrilled to see a new chapter, and I can't wait to see what plans the snakes are hatching in their twisted little minds. :) I just ask one thing - - - can I have a happy ending? I hate it when people get killed off at the end. I look forward to the next chapter!
person Diane
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo, great lemon. I love how you all the characters have grown, and I love all the details you have worked into the story. From eposiodes, manga, and , well real life. You describe situations with great detail, and I love it, keeps the pictures in my mind comeing! Im happy for you with you nomanation, and I hope you win, you deserve it!
person New Fan
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will all of your heros will survive this battle against the snake queen? Great chapter I hope that you will update soon.
person Fran
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving your story. I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep on writing and I'll keep reading! Great work!
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! Keep it up!
person PJ
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter I have been gone and didn't get the read anything for a while so I am playing catch up. I loved the chapter and I am glad they were able to "explain" things to Kouga. I didn't like the way he talked about Inuyasha (being so lowly & dirty) I kind of wish Kagome would have "injured" him a bit but I know that is not like her. The way Kouga left I am not sure if he is done trying to get Kagome. Of course Kouga doesn't realize that if he hurt/kills Inuyasha that Kagome would NEVER have anything to do with him. I liked the whole battle scene with the snake youki you did a great job. Anyway I am off to read the next chapter!!!
person cjflutterbye
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you had Sess 'drop-off' Rin to get her some much needed education. Lots of plot-thickening action here. That Snake wench, well, she's just evil ain't she? I'm looking forward to the climb up the mountain, and the battle, and all of that good stuff you've got going in your head.
person PJ
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow get chapter!! Not much to say I liked the whole history of the village. I also liked how Inuyasha 'explained' to Kagome that he wasn't "soft" LOL. He will make a great father. Anyway keep writing I am now caught up with this story so I look forward to updates.
person Kumiko
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! The Inu/Kag, Mir/San Squishyness (TM) is wonderful!! It makes me all warm in fuzzy inside!!! I've spent all of my Sunday reading your fic!!! Plz, update soon!!! ><