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This was a great ending for our heros. Now in the sequel who will be the main characters. I hope its Sess and Rin. When will
the sequel show its face. I hope that it will be soon I can not wait to start reading the sequel. Will Sess and Inuyasha
start some form of a family relationship between brothers. What impact will Rin have in the sequel. Will the new enemy
be more powerful and evil than Naraku. Please update soon.

bravo, that chapter was awesome. sry i didnt review ch 23, but i'll make up for it now. ch. 23- the dog story felt a little odd to me. the story you told seemed more like one of devotion than of fertility. also found it a bit confusing with the whole cave thing, but then again, it was about 4 am when i started reading it :P
ch. 24- definatly your best chapter yet. excelent job with the fight scene. did you find it as challenging as the one with naraku? ...wow, 32 pages, you never cease to amaze me. with your permissoin, me and juice are going to get to work on a downloadable version of the story (both printable, and an html version) big problem with it so far is that its gonna be a rather large file considering the stories length :P my knoledge of web design is steadily growing, and it shouldnt be to long before i can cook up a way for you to update beautiful souls with out me (e-mail me and tell me to get my ass in gear, i need motivation :P) another question for you... you read the manga, so you speak/read japanese at least semi-fluently then? juice picked up the inu-yasha manga (english) since we found this wonderful piece of work of yours, and it pisses me off to no end that its printed left to right (instead of the usual right to left) and i keep trying to read the frames backwards :( so i refuse to read it. well, enough of me asking for pity, i cant wait to see the conclusion to this wonderful story. i'll update BS tonite, unfortunatly, i g2g right now.

I know I already reviewed, but I can't help it, I'm totally hooked, I can't stop reading!
so...I guess that means there is only one thing to do huh? *gets down on hands and knees* please, PLEASE write a tid bit more! AHHHHHH! I'm so addicted, I think I need to start a help circle, write a book about my obsession and make millions as I strike it big when I get my book on the Oprah book club list. yes, it's perfect! *insert evil laugh* you know, that really doesn't sound all that evil does it? I don't think it really deserved an evil laugh...wait...wait... let me put it in german...Ich bin mich so hingegeben, denke ich, dass ich einen Hilfenkreis, zu schreiben ein Buch um meine Besessenheit und zu machen Millionen anfangen muss, während ich es groß streike, wenn ich mein Buch auf der Oprah Buchklub Liste. ja erhalte, ist es prima! there, that sounds much more evil does it not? hahah i love that language!
anywho, the real purpose of this long comment of hell was to inform you that your novel is AMAZING, and just...keep up the good work I guess!
well have a nice evening!

NO, i'm so so so so sorry about that last chapter. I missed one.NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. it's the end of the world i'm so sorry. My brother got wrose and i'm so afraid for him. I haven't left his side these last two weeks. I love him a lot and i don't want to loss him. I'm sorry that i missed a chapter...me miss one...crys her heart out. I feel like shit for doing that. Now to the story..the passion is dying out girl. Yet the ending fight was well worth it. that was one of the best fights ever written...hell it was the best. The fight with naraku wasn't even this good in my eyes. My favoirte part was when Kagome had that vision of every ones past lives, mostly inuyasha's. It was so perfect. The emotions within me rose up and i cried knowing everything was going to be ok. Also when Miroku told Sango to go on without him and to save their baby...cryed. He risked everything, but she loved him so much that she wouldn't let him go. I now what that feels like, gods. I hope the last chapter has the arrival of the children...dying to know what they're going to be. I hope for a lemon, but not sure how that'll work out...but you now i love them. Well, i hope to read the last chapter soon and i will NOT miss this one. crys...still feeling bad. Keep up the GREAT work kim. I have never read better. Forever your undying fan VIkki

Hey am back read the last 2 chapters they were great. I loved how you brought everything together. Inuyasha/Kagome got some answers to their questions. You did a wonderful job. Poor little Shippou he really is so brave... that doesn't mean he isn't afraid now and then it just means he does the best he can to protect those he can. Can't wait for the next chapter. I am sorry that the next chapter will be the last for this wonderful story. *sniffle* Keep writing

So much action. So many things tied together. Amazing. I look forward to the next, and what looks like, the last chapter. The trip back to their home, babies coming, and the visit back to the Inn... wonderful. See you next time.

Wat to go...gotta leave me hanging? Damn you!:) The descriptions in this chapter are amazing, I felt like I was the one climbing through the mountain. Once again all the little datails added up to make a great descriptive chapter! I cant wait to see how you apply this talent to our story. I would like to draw just a concept sketch of how the Snake Queen should look, so e-mail me and let me know how you want her to look. Don't get me wrong, I like your lemons, but I do love that you chose to make a fan~fic with a real story behind it. It shows you that sex isint everything, espically in a good realationship, and in a good story!! Keep up the good work Kim, in a few years or sooner I expect to be buying your novles on the best seller lists at the Barns & Nobles....but who will draw your book covers?..... ;)

Wow!! This story is really awesome, the lemons, the plot, the characters, the situations, everything!!
You are really talented, I can't wait to read what's coming next. If kagome's nightmare would come true and why if that is the case.
Does the fight would risk the babies' lives?? Oh well, I guess I'll have to wait to find out ne?

Great chapter. I wonder how much that Elk youkai can put together about Inuyasha and Kagome?
In the Kagome's dream, she only saw herself and Inyasha; will Sango and Miroku show up to
destroy the snake queen? Update soon.

Damn i don't know what to say but i really really really want to see MORE. damn this is going to be grate . well see you next monday and thank you for explaining how InuYasha got kagome pergnet now the fun really starts >:-)